唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am walking outside or relaxing. Singing makes me feel happy and refreshed because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, I have never taken any singing lessons or courses. I usually sing alone for fun, and I enjoy it without formal training.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.

範例: I would like to sing for my mother, especially on Mother's Day. For instance, I would prepare a special song to express my love and gratitude towards her.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to structure your answer clearly and check your grammar for subject-verb agreement and word choice.

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to people who enjoy it as a hobby. However, if someone does not like singing or is not good at it, they might not find it enjoyable.

× Yes, I love to sing sometimes, like when I am 3 or simply when wandering around street or going for a walk. Singing.

✓ Yes, I love singing sometimes, like when I am alone or simply when wandering around the street or going for a walk.

The phrase 'love to sing' is acceptable, but 'love singing' fits better with the context. The original sentence has 'when I am 3' which seems incorrect and likely a typo for 'alone'. Also, 'wandering around street' lacks the definite article 'the'. The word 'Singing.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased.

× Actually, I like singing because singing makes me feel. Enjoying and refreshing.

✓ Actually, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and refreshed.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear verb in the second part. 'Enjoying and refreshing' are not used correctly here. The sentence needs to be combined and rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.

× No, still I have not taken any courses or special classes to learn singing.

✓ No, I still have not taken any courses or special classes to learn singing.

The placement of 'still' is awkward. It should come after the subject 'I' for correct emphasis and natural English word order.

× I just see saying simply when I am alone.

✓ I just sing simply when I am alone.

The phrase 'see saying' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'sing'. 'Saying' is a verb form that does not fit here; 'sing' is the correct verb.

× I haven't. Taken any special degree or classes for that as I just enjoyed it.

✓ I haven't taken any special degree or classes for that as I just enjoy it.

The sentence is fragmented with a period after 'haven't'. Also, 'enjoyed' is past tense but the context suggests a present continuous enjoyment, so 'enjoy' is more appropriate.

× Well, I would like to sing for my mother. For example, on Mother's Day, I would like to sync for her a special song or prepared by myself, expressing my love, feelings and gratitude towards her.

✓ Well, I would like to sing for my mother. For example, on Mother's Day, I would like to sing for her a special song prepared by myself, expressing my love, feelings, and gratitude towards her.

The word 'sync' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'or prepared by myself' is incorrect; it should be 'prepared by myself' without 'or'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Actually it depends on person if person is a interested in singing or they enjoy singing as a hobby so it would obviously bring them happiness.

✓ Actually, it depends on the person; if the person is interested in singing or enjoys singing as a hobby, it would obviously bring them happiness.

The original sentence lacks articles before 'person' and has inconsistent pronoun usage. 'a interested' is incorrect; it should be 'interested'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and article use.

× However if a person don't like singing or is a bad ad sending so they might not enjoy same thing.

✓ However, if a person doesn't like singing or is a bad singer, they might not enjoy the same thing.

The verb 'don't' does not agree with the singular subject 'a person'; it should be 'doesn't'. 'ad sending' is a typo and should be 'singer'. Also, 'same thing' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and word choice.