唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng, đồng thời nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy chú ý đến cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel joyful and relaxed. When I sing, it improves my mood and boosts my confidence. Sometimes, I go singing with my friends, which helps us have fun and strengthens our friendship.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh các lỗi như thiếu chủ ngữ hoặc động từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, when I was at school, my teacher taught me how to sing, and I really enjoyed it. It helped me improve my mood and boost my confidence. Sometimes, I would sing with my friends, which made us have fun and strengthened our friendship.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I want to sing with my friends because it makes me feel very happy and joyful. Singing together creates fun moments in real life, which helps us enjoy the moment more. Additionally, sharing this experience strengthens our friendship and brings us closer.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel joyful. For example, when I sing with my friends, I feel more relaxed and confident, which makes the experience very enjoyable. Singing can also help reduce stress and improve your mood.

× Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel joyful and relax.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

The word 'relax' is a verb, but here it should be an adjective to describe the feeling. The correct adjective form is 'relaxed'. Using 'relax' instead of 'relaxed' is incorrect.

× Sometimes I go singing with my friends which help us have a fun end rings finger our friendship.

✓ Sometimes I go singing with my friends, which helps us have fun and strengthens our friendship.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction and phrase usage. 'Which' should be preceded by a comma and refers to the whole preceding clause. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'which'. 'Have a fun end rings finger our friendship' is nonsensical and should be corrected to 'have fun and strengthens our friendship' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, when I was a school my teacher taught me how to sing and I really enjoyed singing.

✓ Yes, when I was at school, my teacher taught me how to sing and I really enjoyed it.

The phrase 'when I was a school' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was at school'. Also, 'enjoyed singing' is acceptable but 'enjoyed it' is more natural here. Commas are needed after introductory phrases.

× Help me improve my mood and boost my confident.

✓ It helped me improve my mood and boost my confidence.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. 'Help' should be 'helped' to match past tense and 'confident' is an adjective; the noun 'confidence' is needed here.

× Sometimes I would sing with my friends which made us have fun answering the our friendship.

✓ Sometimes I would sing with my friends, which made us have fun and strengthened our friendship.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction and phrase usage. 'Which' should be preceded by a comma and refers to the whole preceding clause. 'Answering the our friendship' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'strengthened our friendship' to express the intended meaning.

× I want to sing with my friends because it's make me feel very happy and joyful singing together Crease of fun in real life son Mathia which help us enjoy the moment everything more.

✓ I want to sing with my friends because it makes me feel very happy and joyful singing together. It increases the fun in real life, which helps us enjoy the moment even more.

'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with third person singular. The sentence is also fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'Crease of fun in real life son Mathia' which are corrected to 'It increases the fun in real life'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'which'.

× Additionally, sharing this experience finger our friendship and bring us closer.

✓ Additionally, sharing this experience strengthens our friendship and brings us closer.

'Finger' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'strengthens' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'sharing this experience'.

× Yes, I believe the singing can bring happiness to people because it's allowed them to impress the emotion and threw a joyful.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express emotion and feel joy.

'The singing' is incorrect; 'singing' as a general activity does not need 'the'. 'It's allowed' should be 'it allows'. 'Impress the emotion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'express emotion'. 'Threw a joyful' is incorrect; it should be 'feel joy' or 'experience joy'.

× For example, when I sing with my friends, I feel more relaxed and confident which make the experient very enjoyable.

✓ For example, when I sing with my friends, I feel more relaxed and confident, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

'Which make' should be 'which makes' to agree with singular 'which'. 'Experient' is a typo and should be 'experience'.

× Singing can also help reduce threat and improved your our mood.

✓ Singing can also help reduce stress and improve your mood.

'Threat' is incorrect; the intended word is 'stress'. 'Improved' should be 'improve' to match the modal verb 'can'. 'Your our mood' is redundant; 'your mood' is correct.