唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using simple, correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'be comma different situations' and 'favorite application an eye'.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and forget my worries. I usually sing during my free time, which makes me feel happy and calm.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear, direct response with supporting details. Use correct tenses and avoid irrelevant information. For example, mention when you learnt singing and what you learnt specifically.

範例: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was 16. I joined a singing competition at my school, and my teacher taught me different singing techniques to improve my voice.

建議: Your answer has good content but is unclear due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: If I had a chance to sing, I would sing for my father because he inspires me. He stays calm during hard times and teaches me how to overcome challenges in life.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use simple, clear sentences and correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it helps them relax and forget their problems. When people sing, they often feel joyful and relieved from stress.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me to relax my mind and to be comma different situations.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me to relax my mind and to be calm in different situations.

The phrase 'to be comma different situations' contains a spelling error and incorrect preposition. 'Comma' should be 'calm', and the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate the situations where the calmness applies.

× I love singing as it was my favorite application an eye.

✓ I love singing as it was my favorite activity in my life.

The phrase 'favorite application an eye' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'favorite activity in my life'. 'Application' and 'an eye' are misused here.

× Most preferably do it when in my leisure time.

✓ I preferably do it in my leisure time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. 'Most preferably do it when in my leisure time' should be restructured to 'I preferably do it in my leisure time' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I have learned singing when I was in 16.

✓ Yes, I learned singing when I was 16.

The phrase 'have learned' is present perfect, which is not appropriate with a specific past time 'when I was 16'. The simple past 'learned' is correct. Also, 'in 16' should be '16' without 'in'.

× Did we have a singing competition in our inter school school competition?

✓ We had a singing competition in our inter-school competition.

The original sentence is a question but should be a statement. Also, 'inter school school competition' is redundant; 'inter-school competition' is correct.

× An are singing teacher had the concentrated for us to teach singing on the different aspects of Christmas celebration and I learn to how to sync.

✓ Our singing teacher concentrated on teaching us the different aspects of Christmas celebration, and I learned how to sing.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'An are' should be 'Our'; 'had the concentrated' is incorrect, should be 'concentrated on'; 'to teach singing on' should be 'teaching us'; 'I learn to how to sync' should be 'I learned how to sing'.

× Yes, is preferably I got a chance to sing.

✓ Yes, if I get a chance to sing,

The phrase 'is preferably I got a chance to sing' is ungrammatical. It should be 'if I get a chance to sing' to express a conditional desire.

× I would like to charge.

✓ I would like to perform.

'Charge' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'perform' or 'sing'.

× I would like to sing for my father because he inspires me in every situation and he tries to be calm in difficult situations and he helps me to how to come out of difficult situations and lead a great life.

✓ I would like to sing for my father because he inspires me in every situation, tries to be calm in difficult situations, and helps me to overcome difficulties and lead a great life.

The phrase 'helps me to how to come out' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to overcome' or 'helps me come out'. Also, the sentence is long and can be improved by removing redundant 'he' and improving flow.

× Yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps the individual to being relaxed from the different situations that they're facing in their difficult and hectic life and it helps them to feel elated an over the moon when they tried to sync they they can get tradeoff difficult situations.

✓ Yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps individuals to be relaxed from the different situations they face in their difficult and hectic lives, and it helps them to feel elated and over the moon when they try to sing and can get relief from difficult situations.

Multiple errors: 'being relaxed' should be 'to be relaxed'; 'they're facing' is correct but 'in their difficult and hectic life' should be 'in their difficult and hectic lives'; 'tried to sync' should be 'try to sing'; 'they they can get tradeoff difficult situations' is unclear and corrected to 'can get relief from difficult situations'.