唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after studying all day. It also makes me feel happy and comfortable.

建議: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời dùng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child at a music center in my country. Learning to sing made me feel happy and comfortable, and now it helps me relax.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý muốn hát cùng ai và lý do cụ thể.

範例: I want to sing with my mother because she is an encouraging person. Singing with her always makes me feel comfortable and happy.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các lý do cụ thể và từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to everyone because it helps people feel comfortable and reduces stress after work or study. Listening to singing can also be very enjoyable.

× Yes, I like singing because it helped me a really like an really stress after a study all day and I'm so feel that is a more interesting in a help me more confortable really like in.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after studying all day, and I feel that it is interesting and helps me feel more comfortable.

The original sentence contains incorrect and awkward use of adjectives and adverbs such as 'really like an really stress' and 'more confortable really like in'. These phrases are unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction uses appropriate adjectives and adverbs to clearly express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have learn singing a when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I learned singing when I was a child.

The verb 'have learn' is incorrect; the past participle of 'learn' is 'learned' or 'learnt'. Also, 'a when' is incorrect and should be removed. The sentence is corrected to use the simple past tense 'learned' to match the time reference 'when I was a child'.

× I have learned in a music center in my country in is also make me feel happy and confortable in now I can more relaxed.

✓ I learned at a music center in my country. It also makes me feel happy and comfortable, and now I can feel more relaxed.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'music center'; 'at' is the correct preposition. The sentence structure is also fragmented and unclear, so it is split into clearer sentences. 'Confortable' is misspelled and corrected to 'comfortable'. Verb tenses are adjusted for clarity.

× Well, I want to sing with my mother because she is a. Up grossing person in I want to sing with her because it's always make me feel already like confortable in. Mini.

✓ Well, I want to sing with my mother because she is an encouraging person. I want to sing with her because it always makes me feel comfortable and happy.

The phrase 'Up grossing person' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'encouraging person' which fits the context. The sentence has grammatical errors such as 'it's always make' which should be 'it always makes'. The phrase 'already like confortable in. Mini' is unclear and corrected to 'comfortable and happy' for clarity.

× Just cause a singing can bring happy need to everyone because it can help people more already like confortable an reduced red after work and study every time people are gonna listen. Singing is a microphone.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to everyone because it helps people feel more comfortable and reduces stress after work and study. People enjoy listening to singing through a microphone.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'bring happy need', 'already like confortable an reduced red', and 'Singing is a microphone'. These are corrected to proper expressions conveying the intended meaning. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.