唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ неестественный и содержит много ошибок, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и понятные предложения, избегать лишних слов и выражать мысли ясно. Также стоит улучшить структуру ответа, начиная с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавляя детали.

範例: Yes, I like singing because my favorite singer is Ariana Grande. I enjoy her songs, especially "Let Me Love You," and she inspires me to sing. Singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и избегать излишних слов. Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем добавляйте конкретные детали, используя связующие слова.

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was 8 years old, I attended a music school and studied singing for 10 years. Now, singing is my hobby.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать связующие слова для логичности и конкретизировать мысли. Избегайте неуместных выражений и старайтесь говорить понятно.

範例: When I was younger, I sang for my parents and friends. But now, I usually sing for myself to relax and find peace.

建議: Ответ содержит много ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать правильную грамматику, конкретные примеры и связующие слова для ясности и логичности.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music expresses many emotions. When people listen to good songs, they often feel relaxed and joyful. For example, I feel happy when I sing my favorite songs.

× I'm actually quinolones singing 'cause my child across was Ariana Grande.

✓ I'm actually keen on singing because my idol was Ariana Grande.

The phrase 'quinolones singing' is incorrect and unclear. The student likely meant to express enthusiasm for singing, so 'keen on singing' is appropriate. Also, 'child across' is incorrect; 'idol' fits better to express admiration.

× She's one of the tallest talented singers.

✓ She's one of the most talented singers.

The phrase 'tallest talented singers' is incorrect because 'tallest' refers to height and does not fit here. The correct superlative adjective is 'most talented' to describe skill level.

× My favorite song is Let Me Love You, so she might give me the singing.

✓ My favorite song is 'Let Me Love You', so she might inspire me to sing.

The phrase 'give me the singing' is incorrect. The definite article 'the' is misused here, and the expression is awkward. 'Inspire me to sing' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× So when I was only 8 years old, I go do some musical school.

✓ So when I was only 8 years old, I went to a music school.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time reference. Also, 'do some musical school' is incorrect; 'went to a music school' is the correct expression.

× So I learned how to sing for 10 years.

✓ So I have learned how to sing for 10 years.

Since the action started in the past and continues to the present, the present perfect tense 'have learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'learned'.

× So This is why I am good in singing and I say I will say that it's my hobby right now.

✓ So this is why I am good at singing, and I would say that it's my hobby right now.

The correct preposition after 'good' is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'I say I will say' is redundant; 'I would say' is more natural.

× If being real when I was younger, I ask for my parents, friends or just people who want to listen, how am I thinking?

✓ To be honest, when I was younger, I used to ask my parents, friends, or just people who wanted to listen, 'What do you think?'.

The phrase 'If being real' is incorrect; 'To be honest' is appropriate. 'I ask for' should be 'I used to ask'. Also, 'how am I thinking?' is incorrect; 'What do you think?' fits better.

× But right now I would say that I think for myself only what I want to relax or want to get peace for a minute.

✓ But right now, I would say that I think only for myself when I want to relax or find peace for a moment.

The phrase 'I think for myself only what I want' is awkward. The correct structure is 'I think only for myself when I want...'. Also, 'get peace for a minute' is better expressed as 'find peace for a moment'.

× I think that singing bring happiness to people 'cause sing have a lot of meetings, a lot of filling.

✓ I think that singing brings happiness to people because singing has a lot of meanings and feelings.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Sing have' is incorrect; it should be 'singing has'. Also, 'meetings' and 'filling' are incorrect words here; 'meanings' and 'feelings' are appropriate.

× So, uh, when people hear good music as they just relax and feel happy because in my experience, I feel happy when I think.

✓ So, when people hear good music, they just relax and feel happy because, in my experience, I feel happy when I sing.

The phrase 'hear good music as they just relax' is incorrect; 'when people hear good music, they just relax' is correct. Also, 'I feel happy when I think' is likely a mistake; 'when I sing' fits the context better.