唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: អ្នកគួរតែប្រើពាក្យត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបង្ហាញចម្លើយដែលច្បាស់លាស់ជាងនេះ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យដែលមិនត្រឹមត្រូវដូចជា "seeing" ជំនួស "singing" ហើយព្យាយាមបង្ហាញមូលហេតុដែលច្បាស់លាស់។

範例: Yes, I like singing because my teacher has taught me many techniques. I enjoy singing alone as it helps me relax, but I am shy to sing in front of others.

建議: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធវាក្យសព្ទត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពន្យល់ច្បាស់លាស់ពីរយៈពេលដែលអ្នកបានរៀន។ កុំប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវ និងព្យាយាមបង្កើតប្រយោគដែលមានលក្ខណៈត្រឹមត្រូវ។

範例: Yes, I have been learning to sing since I was 15 years old. My manager has helped me improve my voice, and I feel more confident now.

建議: សូមបង្ហាញចម្លើយដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ពន្យល់ពីមូលហេតុដែលអ្នកចង់ច្រៀងសម្រាប់នរណា។

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported me. She taught me how to sing, so I want to show my appreciation.

建議: សូមប្រើពាក្យត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបង្កើតប្រយោគដែលមានលក្ខណៈច្បាស់លាស់។ ពន្យល់ពីមូលហេតុដែលច្រៀងអាចនាំមកនូវសុភមង្គល។

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel joyful. Many people enjoy listening to songs, but some do not try singing themselves.

× I like seeing you because my teacher teach me how to sing.

✓ I like singing because my teacher teaches me how to sing.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'singing' to express the activity. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'my teacher'.

× my teacher teach me how to sing.

✓ my teacher teaches me how to sing.

In the present simple tense, the verb must agree with the third person singular subject by adding 's' or 'es'. Here, 'teach' should be 'teaches'.

× I can't saying to everybody because they will charge me.

✓ I can't say to everybody because they will charge me.

After modal verbs like 'can't', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'saying' should be 'say'.

× Yes, I learn how to sing since I rose.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing since I was young.

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is appropriate for actions that started in the past and continue to the present. Also, 'rose' is incorrect; 'was young' or 'was a child' fits better here.

× my manager teach me how to sing in my voice is so good thing that they.

✓ My manager taught me how to sing, and my voice is very good because of that.

The past tense 'taught' is needed for the completed action. The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I want to sing as well my mom because she is very good for me.

✓ I want to sing as well as my mom because she is very good to me.

The phrase 'as well as' is the correct conjunction to compare or add. Also, 'good for me' should be 'good to me' to express kindness or support.

× She teach me how to sing so I have to think through.

✓ She teaches me how to sing, so I have to think it through.

'Teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the third person singular subject. Also, the phrase 'think through' needs the object 'it' to be complete.

× because see you for everybody will make they feel good In day love people sing for them, however people don't try.

✓ Because singing for everybody will make them feel good. People love it when others sing for them; however, some people don't try.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and structure. 'They' should be 'them' as the object pronoun. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun usage.