唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tu respuesta debe ser más clara y coherente. Trata de responder directamente a la pregunta con oraciones completas y evita frases confusas o incompletas. Usa conectores para que tus ideas fluyan mejor y mantén la respuesta dentro de cinco oraciones.

範例: Yes, I like singing very much, especially when I am alone. For example, I often sing in the shower because it helps me relax. I enjoy it because it allows me to express my feelings freely. Singing is a fun activity that anyone can practice without worrying about being perfect.

建議: Tu respuesta debe ser más organizada y clara. Responde directamente y luego añade detalles específicos usando conectores. Evita fragmentos incompletos y usa vocabulario adecuado para expresar tus ideas.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. My husband often tells me that I am not very good at singing. However, I admire famous singers like Bryan Adams and Michael Jackson. Maybe one day, I will take singing lessons to improve my skills.

建議: Tu respuesta debe ser más clara y directa. Expresa tu idea principal primero y luego añade detalles específicos con conectores para que la respuesta sea coherente y natural.

範例: I usually sing for myself because it makes me happy. Sometimes, I even dance while singing, which feels like a private performance. I don't feel the need to sing in front of others right now, but maybe I will try it in the future.

建議: Tu respuesta debe ser más clara y organizada. Responde directamente y usa detalles específicos con conectores para apoyar tu opinión. Evita errores gramaticales y frases confusas.

範例: Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is considered an activity that relaxes the body and mind. I have read academic articles that support this idea. Also, singing with friends can increase happiness during weekends or weekdays.

× I'm actually in love singing by myself, for instance.

✓ I'm actually in love with singing by myself, for instance.

The verb 'love' is typically followed by the preposition 'with' when expressing enjoyment of an activity, so 'in love with singing' is correct.

× I do it while I am taking a shower.

✓ I do it while I am showering.

The phrase 'taking a shower' is correct but 'showering' is more natural and concise in this context.

× It is an activity that I enjoyed the most.

✓ It is an activity that I enjoy the most.

The sentence refers to a current preference, so present tense 'enjoy' should be used instead of past tense 'enjoyed'.

× Thinking is a skill that everyone should practice without thinking how well you are doing it.

✓ Singing is a skill that everyone should practice without worrying about how well they are doing it.

The original sentence is confusing and uses 'thinking' incorrectly; it should refer to 'singing' and use 'worrying' to express concern about performance.

× During the bad drone or when you are doing your. How scores probably.

✓ This sentence is unclear and incomplete; it should be removed or rewritten for clarity.

The sentence is fragmented and does not convey a clear meaning, making it grammatically incorrect.

× My husband is probably the most important witness of my disability of syncing.

✓ My husband is probably the most important witness of my disability in singing.

The word 'syncing' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'singing'. Also, 'disability in singing' is the proper phrase.

× However, I have a profound admiration for important singers such as Bryan Adams, Michael Jackson. And more.

✓ However, I have a profound admiration for important singers such as Bryan Adams, Michael Jackson, and more.

The sentence was fragmented; combining the last two parts with a comma and 'and' corrects the structure.

× I will probably. Take a space to one day.

✓ I will probably take a lesson one day.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'take a lesson' is a common phrase for learning to sing.

× I think for myself, I think I am my own public.

✓ I think I sing for myself; I am my own audience.

'My own public' is incorrect; 'my own audience' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence is better connected with a semicolon.

× It is an activity that makes me happy when I think I sometimes dance and we're kind of performance just for myself.

✓ It is an activity that makes me happy; sometimes I dance and perform just for myself.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'we're kind of performance'; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× I don't think I want to have witness.

✓ I don't think I want to have an audience.

'Witness' is not the correct word here; 'audience' is appropriate when referring to people watching a performance.

× Singing for me seems enough.

✓ Singing is enough for me.

The original sentence is awkward; rephrasing to 'Singing is enough for me' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Just at the moment, probably I do it later.

✓ Just at the moment, I probably won't do it; maybe later.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward; rephrasing clarifies the intended meaning about timing.

× I might try.

✓ I might try it.

Adding 'it' clarifies what the speaker might try, making the sentence complete.

× Yes, I totally agree with this timing.

✓ Yes, I totally agree with this timing.

The sentence is correct in present tense; no correction needed.

× I will leave singing provides joyful to people who practice it.

✓ I believe singing provides joy to people who practice it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical; 'I believe' fits better than 'I will leave', and 'provides joy' is correct.

× I have write academic articles in which sing it is consider an activity that brings the permit to the body.

✓ I have written academic articles in which singing is considered an activity that brings benefit to the body.

'Have write' should be 'have written' (past participle), 'sing it' should be 'singing', 'consider' should be 'considered', and 'permit' is incorrect; 'benefit' fits the context.

× Besides shared this activity with friends will both your happiness during the weekend or maybe during the week days.

✓ Besides, sharing this activity with friends will boost your happiness during the weekend or maybe during the weekdays.

'Shared' should be 'sharing' (gerund), 'will both your happiness' is incorrect; 'will boost your happiness' is correct, and 'week days' should be 'weekdays'.