唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Twoja odpowiedź jest zrozumiała, ale zawiera powtórzenia i błędy gramatyczne. Staraj się unikać powtarzania słów oraz poprawić składnię, aby brzmieć bardziej naturalnie i płynnie.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is a creative hobby that allows me to express my emotions and connect with others.

建議: Twoja odpowiedź jest nieco chaotyczna i zawiera błędy gramatyczne. Staraj się tworzyć pełne zdania i używać odpowiednich form czasowników oraz łączyć zdania za pomocą spójników, aby wypowiedź była bardziej spójna.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would really appreciate the chance to take lessons from a professional teacher because it would help me improve my singing skills.

建議: Twoja odpowiedź jest zbyt fragmentaryczna i niepłynna. Staraj się łączyć zdania i unikać przerw, aby wypowiedź była bardziej naturalna i logiczna.

範例: I want to sing for my friends and family to entertain them because I know they really appreciate it, especially during celebrations.

建議: Twoja odpowiedź jest niejasna i zawiera powtórzenia oraz błędy gramatyczne. Staraj się formułować pełne zdania i unikać powtarzania słów, aby wypowiedź była bardziej klarowna i spójna.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because listening to cheerful songs can improve their mood when they feel sad.

× I'm keen on singing because it is very creative hobby and.

✓ I'm keen on singing because it is a very creative hobby.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'hobby'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Here, 'a' is appropriate because 'hobby' is singular and unspecified.

× I can share my my emotions with people and I.

✓ I can share my emotions with people.

The word 'my' is repeated unnecessarily, and the sentence ends abruptly with 'and I' which is incomplete. Removing the repeated 'my' and the incomplete phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would really appreciate to have a chance.

✓ I would really appreciate having a chance.

The verb 'appreciate' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'to have' should be changed to 'having' to be grammatically correct.

× To learn singing.

✓ To learn singing.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence, e.g., 'I would really appreciate having a chance to learn singing.' However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this fragment is noted but not corrected here.

× And we've had professional teacher.

✓ And we've had a professional teacher.

The singular countable noun 'teacher' requires an article. Since it is unspecified, the indefinite article 'a' should be used.

× Because then I would feel.

✓ Because then I would feel much better at singing.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement after 'feel'. Adding 'much better at singing' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I want to sing for my friends and family to.

✓ I want to sing for my friends and family.

The preposition 'to' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The phrase 'sing for' is correct without 'to'.

× Entertain them.

✓ to entertain them.

This is a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence as an infinitive phrase: 'I want to sing for my friends and family to entertain them.'

× Because.

✓ Because I know they really appreciate it.

The word 'Because' is a subordinating conjunction and cannot stand alone as a sentence. It should be connected to a main clause to form a complete sentence.

× I know they really appreciate. Seeing and.

✓ I know they really appreciate seeing it, and

The sentence is incomplete and the pronoun 'it' is missing to refer to the action of singing or entertainment. Also, 'and' is left hanging without continuation.

× It would be a perfect. Entertainment for celebrations.

✓ It would be perfect entertainment for celebrations.

The period after 'perfect' incorrectly splits the sentence. 'Entertainment' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. Combining into one sentence improves clarity.

× Yes, of course happiness can bring happiness to people because when they are sad, they can listen.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people because when they are sad, they can listen.

The original sentence mistakenly repeats 'happiness can bring happiness'. The intended subject is likely 'singing'. Also, the sentence is long and could be clearer with proper punctuation.

× A very. Happy song and which which improve their mood and also yeah.

✓ to a very happy song which improves their mood, and also, yeah.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words 'which which'. 'Happy' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. The verb 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular 'song'. The phrase 'and also yeah' is informal and incomplete but retained as per original style.