唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some unclear or incorrect parts, such as 'my wife is not very good' which seems unrelated. Try to be clear and relevant to the question. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I feel shy when I perform in front of others. Moreover, I think my singing voice is not very good, so I usually avoid it. Instead, I prefer listening to music, which I find more enjoyable.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I haven't been able to perceive it'. Try to use correct verb forms and connect your ideas with linking words for better coherence.

範例: No, I have never had a chance to learn singing, although I wished to learn it during my childhood. However, due to my hectic schedule, I have not been able to pursue it. If I get an opportunity in the future, I would definitely like to learn singing.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as 'Airmen' (possibly a name?), 'is unique voice', and 'Is music invite inspired me a lot'. Please clarify the name and use correct grammar. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: I would like to sing for A.R. Rahman, who is one of the top music directors in India. I really admire his unique voice, which has a deep bass and a distinctive style that sets him apart from other singers. His music has inspired me a lot, and I think singing for him would be a great opportunity.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant with good supporting details. To improve further, you can add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and use a wider range of vocabulary.

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and improves their mood. For instance, when people sing their favourite songs, they often feel more relaxed and joyful, which enhances their overall well-being.

× No, I don't like singing because I think my wife is not very good and it often spoiled the music.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good and it often spoils the music.

The student mistakenly wrote 'my wife' instead of 'my voice', which changes the meaning. Also, 'spoiled' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'spoils' to match 'I don't like'. The correction fixes the noun and verb tense to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Also I feel quite shy when I have to sing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

✓ Also, I feel quite shy when I have to sing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed here.

× No, I have never had a chance to learn singing, although I wish to learn it during my childhood.

✓ No, I have never had a chance to learn singing, although I wished to learn it during my childhood.

The phrase 'wish to learn it during my childhood' is incorrect because the childhood is in the past. The verb 'wish' should be in past tense 'wished' to correctly refer to a past desire.

× However, due to my hectic schedule.

✓ However, due to my hectic schedule, I have not been able to pursue it.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb or complete thought. Adding 'I have not been able to pursue it' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Now I haven't been able to perceive it.

✓ Now I haven't been able to pursue it.

The word 'perceive' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'pursue' meaning to try to learn or engage in something. Also, 'haven't been able to pursue' is the correct present perfect continuous form.

× If I got any opportunity in future, I would definitely like to learn singing.

✓ If I get any opportunity in the future, I would definitely like to learn singing.

The conditional sentence requires the present tense 'get' in the 'if' clause to express a real possibility. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article.

× I would like to sing for Airmen who is one of the top music director in India.

✓ I would like to sing for Airmen who is one of the top music directors in India.

'Music director' should be plural 'music directors' because 'one of the' implies a group. The singular 'director' is incorrect here.

× I really admire is unique voice which has a deep bass and a distinctive style that sets him apart from other singers.

✓ I really admire his unique voice which has a deep bass and a distinctive style that sets him apart from other singers.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrect and should be 'his' to show possession of the unique voice.

× Is music invite inspired me a lot.

✓ His music and style have inspired me a lot.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting it to 'His music and style have inspired me a lot' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× And I think singing for him would be a great opportunity to.

✓ And I think singing for him would be a great opportunity too.

The sentence ends incorrectly with 'to'. It should be 'too' to mean 'also' or 'as well'.