唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I love singing because it has been my favorite hobby since I was a child. My mother also enjoys singing, which inspired me a lot. Singing gives me energy and makes me feel happy.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用时态和词汇，直接回答问题并补充细节。

範例: Yes, I took an optional singing course during my undergraduate studies. It was a valuable experience that helped me improve my singing skills.

建議: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，表达不清楚。建议用完整句子表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: In recent years, I usually like to sing for myself and my mother. Singing for her is a way to express my love and gratitude.

建議: 回答中断断续续，语法和表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，说明原因并举例，使用连接词使表达连贯。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel stressed or confused, I often sing to myself because it helps me relax and improve my mood.

× Singing is my favorite hobbies as I was a child and my mother also like singing too so.

✓ Singing is my favorite hobby since I was a child, and my mother also likes singing.

hobbies是复数形式，但前面用的是单数is，应该用单数hobby。且句子中时态和主谓一致需要调整。

× my mother also like singing too so.

✓ my mother also likes singing.

主语my mother是第三人称单数，谓语动词like应加-s变为likes。

× That will have a great influence to why I like singing.

✓ That has had a great influence on why I like singing.

这里表达过去到现在的影响，使用现在完成时更合适，且介词用on而非to。

× That will have a great influence to why I like singing.

✓ That has had a great influence on why I like singing.

动词influence后应接介词on，而不是to。

× I think seeing thing can give me some power.

✓ I think singing can give me some power.

这里应使用动名词singing表示“唱歌”，seeing是“看见”，不符合语境。

× I can still remember I participate in an optional course during my under graduate.

✓ I can still remember I participated in an optional course during my undergraduate studies.

描述过去的动作，动词participate应使用过去式participated。

× during my under graduate.

✓ during my undergraduate studies.

undergraduate是名词或形容词，需与studies搭配构成短语。

× So maybe that is your is an experience for I learn how to sing.

✓ So maybe that was an experience for me to learn how to sing.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确的主谓宾结构，并使用正确的人称代词me。

× I usually want to. Rights of sing by myself too.

✓ I usually want to sing by myself too.

句子中多余的“Rights of”应删除，保持句子通顺。

× For my mother and two. Express my. Expressor and gratitude to my mother.

✓ For my mother, I want to express my respect and gratitude.

句子断裂且表达不完整，需合并并补充完整表达。

× In recent year.

✓ In recent years.

year应使用复数years，表示最近几年。

× when I traveling something, I will always sing by myself.

✓ when I am traveling somewhere, I will always sing by myself.

traveling前需加be动词am，something用somewhere更合适表示地点。

× I will always sing by myself.

✓ I will always sing by myself.

这里的by myself用法正确，无需修改。

× I think that is a good method to. Relax my. Emotion and.

✓ I think that is a good method to relax my emotions.

relax后应接宾语emotions，且emotion应为复数形式。句子需合并完整。