唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I like singing because it helps me to relax and reduce stress."のように簡潔に答えることが大切です。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me to relax and reduce stress after a long day.

建議: 回答がほとんど意味を成しておらず、質問に直接答えていません。質問に対して簡潔に「いいえ、習ったことはありません」と答え、その後に理由や感想を付け加える練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I enjoy singing for fun at home.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I want to sing for my girlfriend who is studying abroad because it helps me feel closer to her."のように表現できます。

範例: I want to sing for my girlfriend who is studying abroad in America because it helps me feel connected to her despite the distance.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りが多く意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由や具体例を付け加える練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I believe singing has a great power to bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others.

× Yes I do becauses singing Max main calm down.

✓ Yes, I do because singing makes me calm down.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'Max main' is a mishearing or typo for 'makes me'. The sentence needs proper conjunction and verb form to be grammatically correct.

× Hard down.

✓ It helps me calm down.

'Hard down' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'calm down' or 'relax'. The sentence should be completed to express the idea clearly.

× When I sing a song, I can feel. Relaxing and.

✓ When I sing a song, I can feel relaxed.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Relaxing and' is not a proper phrase here. The correct form is 'I can feel relaxed' to express the feeling properly.

× It makes me. Stress.

✓ It relieves my stress.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'stress' incorrectly as a verb. The correct expression is 'It relieves my stress' or 'It makes me less stressed'.

× No I haven't, but I attracted run about thinking becauses I'm not good at thinking where so.

✓ No, I haven't, but I have thought about it because I'm not good at it.

The phrase 'I attracted run about thinking' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I have thought about it'. Also, 'becauses' should be 'because'. The sentence needs correction for tense and clarity.

× Aye. Can't understand the way too.

✓ I can't understand the way either.

'Aye' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. Also, 'too' should be 'either' in negative sentences. The sentence needs proper pronoun and adverb usage.

× And seeing with high boys.

✓ And I have difficulty singing with high notes.

The phrase 'seeing with high boys' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely about difficulty with high notes or singing high pitches. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× I drank two thing for my girlfriend.

✓ I wrote two songs for my girlfriend.

'Drank two thing' is incorrect and does not make sense. The intended meaning is likely 'I wrote two songs'. The verb and object need correction.

× It is very far from me, so I can. Meet with her

✓ She is studying abroad in America, which is very far from me, so I cannot meet her.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'meet with her' incorrectly. The correct phrase is 'meet her'. Also, the sentence needs to express inability due to distance.

× So I drafted tab my mind on by singing a song.

✓ So I clear my mind by singing a song.

The phrase 'drafted tab my mind on' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'clear my mind'. The sentence needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I do. I ha, I think singing.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing

The phrase 'I ha,' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be removed for clarity.

× Is have very big power, so I think singing.

✓ has very big power, so I think singing

'Is have' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'has' for singular subject 'singing'.

× Max there was a better and bring.

✓ makes the world better and brings happiness.

The phrase 'Max there was a better and bring' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'makes the world better and brings happiness'. The sentence needs restructuring and correct verb forms.