唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me. Relax an experience my emotions after a long time.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I haven't studied specifically but I really like to saying so sometimes I will learn it myself, like from Internet from. Uh, my cousin, because she know how to sing and she is a professional singer.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I wanna sing for myself because I like myself. And I feel confident when I hear my own song.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, of course. I believe singing will bring happiness to people because it will make people experience their emotions and feelings and bring them hapiness. Make them relax, specially the people that enjoy music like myself. Yeah.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 60.0建議: 你的回答有语法错误，表达不够连贯，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并且用连接词使表达更自然。
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions after a long day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子，明确表达学习经历，并使用连接词使句子流畅。
範例: I haven't formally studied singing, but I enjoy it and sometimes try to learn by myself from the Internet or from my cousin, who is a professional singer.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答较为简单，建议使用更正式的表达，避免口语缩写，并且丰富细节使回答更具体。
範例: I want to sing for myself because it boosts my confidence and I enjoy listening to my own voice.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复表达，并且丰富细节。
範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relax, especially those who love music like me.
文法
× Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me. Relax an experience my emotions after a long time.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and experience my emotions after a long time.
原句中“Relax an experience my emotions after a long time”结构混乱，缺少连词，导致句子不完整。应将“Relax”改为动词不定式形式“relax”，并用“and”连接两个动作，形成完整句子。
× I haven't studied specifically but I really like to saying so sometimes I will learn it myself, like from Internet from.
✓ I haven't studied specifically but I really like singing, so sometimes I will learn it myself, like from the Internet.
“like to saying”中“to”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词，应改为“like singing”。另外，“from Internet from”重复且缺少冠词，应改为“from the Internet”。
× Uh, my cousin, because she know how to sing and she is a professional singer.
✓ Uh, my cousin, because she knows how to sing and she is a professional singer.
主语是第三人称单数“she”，谓语动词“know”应加-s，变为“knows”，以符合主谓一致规则。
× I wanna sing for myself because I like myself.
✓ I wanna sing for myself because I like myself.
此句中“myself”用法正确，无需修改。
× And I feel confident when I hear my own song.
✓ And I feel confident when I hear my own songs.
“song”应为复数形式“songs”，因为通常人们听自己的多首歌曲，且语境更自然。
× Make them relax, specially the people that enjoy music like myself.
✓ It makes them relax, especially people who enjoy music like me.
“Make them relax”缺少主语，应加“It”。“specially”应为“especially”，表示特别。关系代词“that”改为“who”更合适指人。最后“like myself”改为“like me”，更符合口语习惯。
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