唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use linking words and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'singing is a better way to relax my body and good for my mood changing', you can say 'I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood.'

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood after a long day.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, you can say 'No, I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I try to learn by listening to songs on my phone and practicing along with them.'

範例: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I try to learn by listening to songs on my phone and practicing along with them.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear sentence structure and grammar mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details using linking words. For example, you can say 'I want to sing for someone special in my life because singing helps me express my emotions and show how much they mean to me.'

範例: I want to sing for someone special in my life because singing helps me express my emotions and show how much they mean to me.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, you can say 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their busy daily schedules.'

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their busy daily schedules.

× Yes, I like singing because singing is a better way to relax my body and good for my mood changing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing is a better way to relax my body and good for changing my mood.

The phrase 'mood changing' is incorrect as an adjective here. The correct form is 'changing my mood' to express the action of altering one's mood. This is an issue of incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× No, I have a note. I haven't learning experience to sing.

✓ No, I have no experience. I haven't learned how to sing.

The phrase 'I haven't learning experience' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past participle form 'learned' should be used with 'have' to indicate experience. This is a past tense issue.

× But I play. Find my phone. Play list and are trying to learn how to play and how to sing.

✓ But I play. I find my phone playlist and am trying to learn how to play and how to sing.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper subject-verb agreement and structure. Adding subjects and correcting verb forms improves clarity. This is a sentence structure error.

× I sing for my someone special person of my life and.

✓ I sing for someone special in my life.

The phrase 'my someone special person of my life' is redundant and incorrect. Using 'someone special in my life' is clearer and grammatically correct. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× Call photo singing singing through I express my emotions and the.

✓ Through singing, I express my emotions.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning. This is a sentence structure error.

× Tell, tell him what special space in my life for him to him.

✓ I tell him how special a place he has in my life.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Correcting the structure and word order improves clarity. This is a sentence structure error.

× Yes, I think thinking cannot bring happiness to people when people have a.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people when they have a...

The phrase 'I think thinking cannot bring happiness' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, 'singing' was intended. Also, 'people' should be replaced with 'they' for pronoun clarity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× Load board and a busy busy schedule of day.

✓ a loaded board and a busy schedule of the day.

The phrase 'load board' is unclear; likely 'loaded board' or 'busy schedule' is intended. Also, 'busy busy' is repetitive. Adding 'the' before 'day' is necessary. This is a sentence structure error.

× My game. Open to listen music and.

✓ My game is to open and listen to music.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding verbs and prepositions clarifies the meaning. This is a sentence structure error.

× True through relaxation time.

✓ It helps me relax during my free time.

The phrase 'True through relaxation time' is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrasing to express the intended meaning improves clarity. This is a sentence structure error.