唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer phrasing. Also, avoid repetition and keep your answer concise and coherent by using linking words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For instance, after a stressful day at school, singing songs with my parents makes me feel much calmer and happier.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Focus on clear sentence structure and relevant vocabulary. Provide specific details about your singing lessons and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I have taken singing lessons. Last year, I attended classes twice a week for about ten months. During these lessons, I learned various techniques to improve my voice and control.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and organise your sentences logically. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and be specific about who you want to sing for and why.

範例: I would like to sing for my mother to thank her for her support. Also, I want to sing for my father because he has helped train me since I was born.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it is a relaxing activity. For example, during Family Day, my family often sings together, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

× Yeah, sure, I liked to sing because it's give me relaxing and.

✓ Yeah, sure, I liked to sing because it gives me relaxation.

The verb 'liked' is correctly in past tense to indicate past preference. However, 'it's give' is incorrect; 'it' requires the third person singular present tense verb 'gives'. Also, 'relaxing' should be a noun 'relaxation' to fit the sentence meaning.

× For example, some days have some distress after school right?

✓ For example, some days I have some distress after school, right?

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' before the verb 'have'. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the subject experiencing distress.

× But when I'm come back home and hey have to sing a song with my parents, I can really stress stress.

✓ But when I come back home and have to sing a song with my parents, I can really relieve stress.

'I'm come back' is incorrect; it should be 'I come back' in present tense. 'hey have' is likely a typo for 'I have'. Also, 'stress stress' is repetitive and unclear; 'relieve stress' is a correct expression.

× Yes I have I have learn how to sing and 10 days a month at this simple last year thing I get.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing and practiced 10 days a month last year.

'learn' should be in past participle 'learned' after 'have'. The sentence is also unclear and needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× And may need a number of techniques and hunter singing carilion to be aggressive.

✓ And I may need a number of techniques and proper singing training to be better.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('hunter singing carilion'). Replacing with 'proper singing training' and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammar.

× That's very interesting to share limit think.

✓ That's very interesting to share, I think.

The phrase 'share limit think' is incorrect and unclear. Adding a comma and 'I think' clarifies the sentence meaning.

× I think the one I want you to sing voice my mom.

✓ I think the one I want to sing for is my mom.

The sentence misuses pronouns and word order. Correcting to 'I want to sing for my mom' clarifies the meaning.

× I want to sing in the in terms of saying thank you to help Dad trained me well since I'm.

✓ I want to sing to say thank you for helping Dad train me well since I was born.

The phrase 'in the in terms of' is incorrect. Using 'to say thank you for helping' and correcting tense improves clarity and grammar.

× Birth until today, and also my father too.

✓ from birth until today, and also to my father too.

The phrase 'Birth until today' lacks a preposition 'from' and needs to connect properly to the previous sentence. Adding 'from' and 'to my father too' completes the meaning.

× Yes I do. I think singing hamble happiness to people because it is so relax activities.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing brings happiness to people because it is such a relaxing activity.

'hamble' is incorrect; 'brings' fits the meaning. 'so relax activities' should be 'such a relaxing activity' to correctly quantify and describe the noun.

× For example when in Family Day my familiar so do some activity togethers and that is singing together.

✓ For example, during Family Day, my family does some activities together, and that is singing together.

'my familiar' should be 'my family'. 'so do some activity togethers' is incorrect; 'does some activities together' is correct subject-verb agreement and plural noun usage.