唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm so believe' và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn như 'I strongly believe'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau.

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions after a busy day. Singing with my friends makes it even more enjoyable and fun.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác, ví dụ 'singing glass app' nên là 'singing class'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh câu bị ngắt quãng như 'and also.' Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Yes, I took a professional singing class last year, which helped me gain confidence in my singing ability. Moreover, I found it to be a great way to relax after a busy day.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sắp xếp câu hợp lý, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.

範例: I want to sing for my family because every year we have a tradition of taking turns to perform at family gatherings. It is not only entertaining but also brings us closer together.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'singing bring' nên là 'singing brings', và 'relieving thread' có thể là lỗi đánh máy của 'relieving stress'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings joy to many people because it allows us to express our emotions and relieve stress. Therefore, performing everyone's favorite songs can really lift the mood.

× I'm so believe that singing is a great way to express our emotion and relieve stress.

✓ I strongly believe that singing is a great way to express our emotions and relieve stress.

The phrase 'I'm so believe' is incorrect because 'believe' is a verb and should not be used with 'I'm'. Instead, use 'I strongly believe' to express certainty. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× Yes, I took a professional singing glass app last year.

✓ Yes, I took a professional singing class last year.

The word 'glass' is a typo and should be 'class'. The past tense 'took' is correctly used here.

× I find that taking classes will help me feel confident in my singing ability and also.

✓ I find that taking classes helps me feel confident in my singing ability as well.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and also.' which is incomplete. It should be completed or rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I thought it is a great way to relax after a busy day.

✓ I think it is a great way to relax after a busy day.

The sentence mixes past tense 'thought' with present tense 'is'. Since the context is general, present tense 'think' is appropriate.

× Well, I want to perform in front of my families for every year we have a tradition is taking turn to sing at family gatherings is not only on.

✓ Well, I want to perform in front of my family because every year we have a tradition of taking turns to sing at family gatherings, which is not only fun but also meaningful.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. The sentence is also fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Interesting, entertaining, but also a way to.

✓ It is interesting, entertaining, and also a way to bond with family.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. It needs to be completed to convey a full idea.

× Yes, I believe singing bring joy to many people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing brings joy to many people.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' (third person singular).

× Because singing is a great way to express our emotion and relieving thread.

✓ Because singing is a great way to express our emotions and relieve stress.

'Relieving thread' is incorrect; it should be 'relieve stress'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'our'. The sentence structure requires parallelism: 'express' and 'relieve'.

× So therefore I believe that performing favourites everybody favorite song will live up the mood.

✓ Therefore, I believe that performing everyone's favorite songs will lift up the mood.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'favourites everybody favorite song' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be 'everyone's favorite songs'. 'Live up the mood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lift up the mood' or 'improve the mood'.