唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and minor grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying 'a a passion', say 'a passion'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because I started learning it in primary school, which sparked my passion for music. Additionally, I love listening to songs and often find myself humming along, as it helps me feel relaxed and happy.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating words like 'used to'. Also, clarify your sentences for better flow and coherence.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing in primary school. Whenever there was a competition, I participated and won several prizes and certificates.

建議: Your answer is heartfelt but lacks clarity and contains some confusing phrases like 'I live neatly like to sing' and 'Power of Mother song'. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I would definitely like to sing for my mother because she is very hardworking and always motivates me. She supports me in every situation, so singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude.

建議: Your answer has good points but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'refresh is your body and mind' and 'like using so much'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it reduces stress and refreshes both the body and mind. Many people enjoy it so much that they often find themselves humming along, which also boosts their confidence.

× I started learning it in my primary school which helped me to develop a a passion for music.

✓ I started learning it in my primary school which helped me to develop a passion for music.

There is a repeated article 'a a' before 'passion'. This is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'a'.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my primary school and whenever they used to be a competition, I used to participate in the particular competition and I have one one various prizes and certificates for winning the competition.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my primary school and whenever there was a competition, I used to participate in that competition and I have won various prizes and certificates for winning the competition.

The phrase 'have learned' is acceptable but 'learned' is more common in this context. 'They used to be a competition' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a competition' to indicate existence in the past. 'I have one one' is a typo and should be 'I have won'. These corrections align with proper past tense usage and correct word choice.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The correct object pronoun 'whom' should be used instead of 'who' when referring to the object of the verb 'want to sing for'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is often used informally.

× I'll definitely like to sing for my mother because she is very hard working and she is the only one who keeps me motivated and never lets me down as she always has my back and I live neatly like to sing. Power of Mother song.

✓ I'll definitely like to sing for my mother because she is very hardworking and she is the only one who keeps me motivated and never lets me down as she always has my back and I really like to sing 'Power of Mother' song.

The phrase 'I live neatly like to sing' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I really like to sing'. Also, 'hard working' should be one word 'hardworking'. The song title should be enclosed in quotes for clarity.

× Oh yes definitely singing can bring happiness to people as it not only reduces your mind stress but also refresh is your body and mind.

✓ Oh yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people as it not only reduces your mind stress but also refreshes your body and mind.

The verb 'refresh' should be in third person singular form 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, a comma after 'Oh yes' improves readability.

× Some people like using so much that they find themselves humming along it and.

✓ Some people like singing so much that they find themselves humming along to it.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Like using so much' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing so much'. Also, 'humming along it and' is incorrect; it should be 'humming along to it'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× It also re boosts your confidence.

✓ It also reboosts your confidence.

The word 're boosts' is incorrectly split. The correct form is 'reboosts' as a single verb meaning to boost again.