唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений, таких как "used to love to see" и "spent who my time by to learn". Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным. Также стоит избегать излишней информации и сосредоточиться на прямом ответе с поддерживающими деталями.

範例: Yes, I like singing because I have admired Billie Eilish since I was a child. I spent a lot of time learning her songs and lyrics, which helped me enjoy singing even more.

建議: В вашем ответе много ошибок в грамматике и лексике, например, "learned how to see" вместо "learned how to sing" и "by my own" вместо "on my own". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для улучшения связности речи. Рекомендуется практиковать правильное употребление слов и фраз, а также строить предложения более логично и понятно.

範例: I have never taken singing lessons from a teacher, but I practiced on my own. I spent a lot of time learning the lyrics and how to sing the right notes. I even recorded videos of myself singing, which I enjoy watching.

建議: Ваш ответ достаточно хороший, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразить лексику. Например, использовать более точные слова и фразы, а также добавить связующие слова для плавного перехода между предложениями. Это сделает ваш ответ более естественным и интересным.

範例: When I was a child, I enjoyed singing for my parents and relatives because they appreciated it. Nowadays, I prefer to sing for my friends at parties since it's entertaining and fun to perform in front of a close group. I find it exciting to share music and create a lively atmosphere during social events.

建議: В вашем ответе много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений, например, "when you seen you enjoy this" и "during this singing scene". Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также добавлять связующие слова для улучшения логики и плавности речи. Старайтесь выражать мысли ясно и конкретно.

範例: I believe singing can bring happiness because when you sing, you enjoy yourself. Others may like it too, making it entertaining and fun for many people.

× Actually, when I was a child, I used to love to see because I had a favorite artist, it was Billie Eilish and I spent who my time by to learn how to sing and how to learn the words she said about.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I used to love singing because I had a favorite artist, Billie Eilish, and I spent most of my time learning how to sing and how to learn the words she sang about.

The phrase 'love to see' is incorrect; the verb 'love' is commonly followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'spent who my time by to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'spent most of my time learning'. The verb 'learn' should be in the gerund form after 'spent time'. Additionally, 'words she said about' is awkward; 'words she sang about' is more appropriate.

× I spent who my time by to learn how to sing and how to learn the words she said about.

✓ I spent most of my time learning how to sing and how to learn the words she sang about.

The phrase 'who my time' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'most of my time'. Also, 'how to learn the words she said about' is awkward; it should be 'how to learn the words she sang about' to refer to song lyrics.

× So I think that I am still enjoying singing because it is really appreciating time.

✓ So I think that I still enjoy singing because it is really an enjoyable pastime.

The phrase 'really appreciating time' is incorrect; 'appreciating' is a verb, not an adjective. The correct expression is 'an enjoyable pastime' or 'a really enjoyable time' to express pleasure in an activity.

× To be honest, I have never learned how to see with teacher and instead I was practicing by my own.

✓ To be honest, I have never learned how to sing with a teacher and instead I practiced on my own.

The verb 'see' is incorrect; it should be 'sing' to match the context. Also, 'practicing by my own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'practiced on my own'. The past simple 'practiced' fits better here than past continuous 'was practicing' because it refers to a habitual past action.

× I have never learned how to see with teacher and instead I was practicing by my own.

✓ I have never learned how to sing with a teacher and instead I practiced on my own.

The phrase 'with teacher' is missing an article; it should be 'with a teacher'. Also, 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on my own'.

× I spent a lot of time learning their lyrics and how to do it right, to see what accords I should use an etc.

✓ I spent a lot of time learning the lyrics and how to do it right, to see what chords I should use, etc.

The pronoun 'their' is unclear; 'the lyrics' is more appropriate. 'Accords' is incorrect; the correct word is 'chords'. Also, 'an etc.' is incorrect; 'etc.' stands alone without an article.

× So I think that I have done it very good because I have still a lot of videos how it was singing and I like it.

✓ So I think that I have done it very well because I still have a lot of videos of how I was singing and I like it.

The adverb 'good' is incorrectly used; it should be 'well' to modify the verb 'done'. The phrase 'I have still a lot of videos how it was singing' is awkward; it should be 'I still have a lot of videos of how I was singing'.

× Actually, when I was a kid, I like to sing for my parents and relatives because they really enjoyed listening to me.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, I liked to sing for my parents and relatives because they really enjoyed listening to me.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× Nowadays, I would probably prefer to sing for my friends at parties as it is always entertaining and fun to perform in front of a close group of people.

✓ Nowadays, I probably prefer to sing for my friends at parties as it is always entertaining and fun to perform in front of a close group of people.

The modal verb 'would' suggests a hypothetical or conditional situation, but here the speaker is stating a current preference, so 'probably prefer' without 'would' is more appropriate.

× To be honest, I really think that singing can bring happiness to people because when you seen you enjoy this and probably some people like it too and it can be really entertaining and fascinating for many people and they will have a lot of fun during this singing scene.

✓ To be honest, I really think that singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing, you enjoy it and probably some people like it too. It can be really entertaining and fascinating for many people, and they will have a lot of fun during this singing experience.

The word 'seen' is incorrect; it should be 'sing' to match the context. The phrase 'you enjoy this' is vague; 'you enjoy it' is clearer. 'Singing scene' is awkward; 'singing experience' is more natural.