唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood. For example, when I feel sad, singing a cheerful song can make me feel better.

建議: Your response should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct answer, then provide specific details about your experience using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear expressions.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I participated in a British singing competition, and my teacher taught me some singing techniques. Although I am not a professional, I consider myself a good singer.

建議: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they are my biggest supporters. Singing allows me to express my emotions, and sharing that with them makes me feel closer to them.

建議: Your answer should be more concise and clear. Start with a direct statement, then explain why singing brings happiness using specific reasons and linking words.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps reduce stress and improves people's moods. For instance, singing can turn a bad day into a good one by lifting your spirits.

× Yes, yes, I like singing be causing is a bad thing is a good thing for dar leaf of the stress and a swing of the bad mood.

✓ Yes, yes, I like singing because it is not a bad thing; it is a good thing for relief of stress and improving a bad mood.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'be causing' instead of the conjunction 'because' to explain the reason. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and lacks proper connectors. Using 'because' correctly links the cause and effect, and restructuring the sentence improves clarity.

× Yes, yes, I like singing be causing is a bad thing is a good thing for dar leaf of the stress and a swing of the bad mood.

✓ Yes, yes, I like singing because it is not a bad thing; it is a good thing for relief of stress and improving a bad mood.

The phrase 'dar leaf of the stress' is incorrect; the correct preposition and noun phrase is 'relief of stress'. Also, 'a swing of the bad mood' is incorrect; it should be 'improving a bad mood' or 'lifting a bad mood'. Proper prepositions and noun choices are necessary for clear meaning.

× Run Vin I am sad I I tried to single song like a funny way.

✓ When I am sad, I try to sing songs in a funny way.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Run Vin' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and verb forms to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Oh. Then I am when I am studying at school, then I am participate in the singing of British and then my teacher is to learn about a singing.

✓ Oh, when I was studying at school, I participated in British singing competitions, and my teacher taught me about singing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'am' and 'participate' when referring to past events. The past tense 'was' and 'participated' are appropriate. Also, 'my teacher is to learn about a singing' is incorrect; it should be 'my teacher taught me about singing'.

× So not a good but normally I am good singer.

✓ I am not a good singer, but normally I am a good singer.

The sentence lacks proper pronouns and articles. Adding 'I am' at the start and 'a' before 'good singer' corrects the sentence. The original sentence is confusing and incomplete.

× I want to sing for me to my family because family are two a good supporter when you are to know to express a.

✓ I want to sing for my family because family are good supporters when you want to express yourself.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles, and the phrase 'me to my family' is incorrect. Correct pronouns and article usage improve clarity. Also, 'are two a good supporter' is incorrect; it should be 'are good supporters'.

× Oh an emotion and any go to other applications to your.

✓ They help you express emotions and apply them in other situations.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it with proper sentence structure and vocabulary clarifies the intended meaning.

× I am prefer to my family.

✓ I prefer my family.

The phrase 'I am prefer to my family' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' does not require 'am' and 'to' in this context. The correct form is 'I prefer my family'.

× Yes, singing is a most important part of the life of causing a Singing is a way of the reduced to stress and swing to the good bad mood, swing to godmode.

✓ Yes, singing is a very important part of life because singing is a way to reduce stress and improve mood.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a most important part of the life' instead of 'a very important part of life'. Also, 'a way of the reduced to stress' is incorrect; it should be 'a way to reduce stress'. The phrase 'swing to the good bad mood' is unclear and corrected to 'improve mood'.

× Singing is a not a bad thing. I think so.

✓ Singing is not a bad thing. I think so.

The phrase 'a not a bad thing' is incorrect; the article 'a' should be removed before 'not'. The corrected sentence is grammatically correct and clearer.