唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや言い換えの混乱が見られます。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、冗長な部分を避けてください。例えば、「I feel like an American pop star and I can forget my problems」など、正しい冠詞と動詞の使い方に注意しましょう。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel energetic and happy. When I sing, I feel like an American pop star and can forget my problems.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい時制と表現を使い、簡潔に答えることを意識してください。例えば、「I haven't learnt how to sing, but I want to because singing makes me feel confident in front of people」などが良いでしょう。

範例: No, I haven't learnt how to sing, but I want to because singing makes me feel confident when I perform in front of people.

建議: 回答は直接的ですが、繰り返しが多く、内容が薄いです。より具体的に理由や状況を加えて、話を豊かにしましょう。例えば、「I want to sing for my family because it makes us happy, and I enjoy singing together with them」など。

範例: I want to sing for my family because it brings us joy, and I enjoy singing together with them during special occasions.

建議: 回答が不完全で、文が途切れているため意味が伝わりにくいです。理由や具体例を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが重要です。例えば、「Yes, singing brings happiness because it makes me feel energetic and comfortable. Also, attending concerts is enjoyable」など。

範例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it makes me feel energetic and comfortable. Also, I enjoy going to concerts, which adds to my happiness.

× I feel like a American pop music star and up.

✓ I feel like an American pop music star and up.

'American' starts with a vowel sound, so the article 'a' should be changed to 'an' to be grammatically correct.

× Yeah, I forgot I can forgot, forget about the problem that I have.

✓ Yeah, I forgot, I can forget about the problem that I have.

The phrase 'I can forgot' is incorrect because 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, which is 'forget', not the past tense 'forgot'.

× No, I haven't, but I want to come.

✓ No, I haven't, but I want to learn.

The phrase 'I want to come' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'I want to learn' to express desire to learn singing.

× I like to sing a song so much and if I saying like a like a star.

✓ I like to sing a song so much and if I sing like a star.

The phrase 'if I saying' is incorrect; it should be 'if I sing' to use the correct verb form after 'if'.

× I feel like more confident it sing. In front of people.

✓ I feel more confident to sing in front of people.

The phrase 'it sing' is incorrect; it should be 'to sing' to express purpose or intention.

× Oh, that's interesting question.

✓ Oh, that's an interesting question.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before 'interesting question'.

× And I want to sing. And I want to sing with them.

✓ And I want to sing with them.

The first sentence is incomplete and redundant; combining into one clear sentence improves clarity.

× when I sing a song I feel so energetic and feel comfortable and. So. Come.

✓ When I sing a song, I feel so energetic and comfortable.

The phrase 'and. So. Come.' is unclear and incorrect; it should be removed for clarity.

× And also when. I went to the concert and. This.

✓ And also when I went to the concert.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented; removing 'and. This.' makes it grammatically correct.