唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容不够连贯。建议直接回答问题，避免使用错误的代词和不完整的句子，同时增加具体原因。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I feel shy when I sing in front of others. Also, I think I am not very good at it, so I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并且提供更具体的理由。

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't enjoy singing and I think I lack the talent. Also, I haven't had time to take singing lessons.

建議: 回答表达了情感，但存在词汇错误和语法问题。建议使用正确的词汇表达感情，并且使句子更流畅。

範例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. Singing for them is a way to show my gratitude and love.

建議: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy. For example, many people enjoy singing in the shower or while driving because it helps them relax and feel joyful.

× No, I don't like him because I prefer listening to music.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I prefer listening to music.

这里的代词“him”使用错误，应该用动名词“singing”来表示喜欢或不喜欢的动作。

× I think I'm not a good after seeing and uh, when I seen two other peoples, I will feel very awkward.

✓ I think I'm not good at singing, and when I see two other people, I feel very awkward.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“see”；“peoples”是复数错误，正确为“people”；“after seeing”后缺少宾语，补充为“singing”。

× And uh, I don't think oily. Two thing.

✓ And uh, I don't think so. Two things.

“oily”用词错误，应为“so”；“thing”应为复数“things”。

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I don't enjoy seeing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't enjoy singing.

“learn”应使用过去分词“learned”与现在完成时连用；“seeing”应为“singing”，表示唱歌。

× I prefer listening to music and I think I'm not good at us thing.

✓ I prefer listening to music and I think I'm not good at this thing.

“us”用词错误，应为指示代词“this”。

× And I don't have time to learn it, so I never learn how to sing.

✓ And I don't have time to learn it, so I have never learned how to sing.

“never learn”应使用现在完成时“have never learned”表示至今未学过。

× I want to sing to my family because my family is my biggest supporter.

✓ I want to sing for my family because my family is my biggest supporter.

动词“sing”后应接介词“for”表示为某人唱歌，而非“to”。

× So I want to sing to them to show my hurt.

✓ So I want to sing to them to show my heart.

“hurt”拼写错误，应为“heart”，表示“心”。

× And the show, my love.

✓ And to show my love.

句子结构不完整，缺少动词“to show”，使句子完整。

× Yes, I think thing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“thing”用词不当，应具体指“singing”。

× Becauses some people liked you seeing when they are.

✓ Because some people like singing when they are.

“liked”时态错误，应为一般现在时“like”；“you seeing”错误，应为“singing”。

× Taking a shower and the driving the car.

✓ taking a shower and driving a car.

句子缺主语，且“the driving the car”结构错误，应改为“driving a car”。

× People usually think the thing can make them happy.

✓ People usually think singing can make them happy.

“the thing”用词不当，应具体指“singing”。

× And uh. Spray.

✓ And uh, I agree.

“Spray”无意义，句子不完整，应补充完整表达。