唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: I don't enjoy singing much because I'm not confident in my voice. I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing myself. I find it more relaxing to appreciate good songs than to perform them.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because it has never been one of my main interests. However, I enjoy listening to music and sometimes sing along with the lyrics for fun. Therefore, I prefer appreciating music rather than formally learning to sing.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they have always supported me. I also hope to sing for my future loved ones since they will mean a lot to me. Singing for them is a way to show my love and appreciation.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to many unclear and incorrect phrases. Focus on clear and simple sentences, correct grammar, and relevant examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it expresses emotions and makes people feel relaxed. For example, traditional songs are often used in spiritual ceremonies to create a joyful atmosphere and improve people's moods.

× An I usually prefer to listen to music or through rather than singing myself.

✓ And I usually prefer to listen to music or through rather than singing myself.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And' to correctly connect the sentence. This is a pronoun usage error as it affects sentence clarity.

× An I usually prefer to listen to music or through rather than singing myself.

✓ And I usually prefer to listen to music or through rather than singing myself.

The phrase 'or through' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions or pronouns. It should be corrected to 'or through' to clarify meaning or replaced with a correct phrase. However, since it does not match any listed grammar problem types, no correction is made here.

× I thought it's more relaxing to every appreciates good songs then to perform them.

✓ I thought it's more relaxing to appreciate good songs than to perform them.

The phrase 'every appreciates' is incorrect; 'appreciate' should be used as the verb in infinitive form after 'to'. Also, 'then' should be 'than' for comparison. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and conjunctions.

× The call is had never been one of my main interests or hobbies.

✓ The call has never been one of my main interests or hobbies.

The phrase 'is had never been' is incorrect past tense usage. The correct present perfect form is 'has never been' to indicate an action that has not occurred up to now.

× However, I really enjoys listening to music and sometimes like to sing along with the lyrics for fun.

✓ However, I really enjoy listening to music and sometimes like to sing along with the lyrics for fun.

The verb 'enjoys' is incorrectly conjugated for the first person singular subject 'I'. It should be 'enjoy' to agree with the subject.

× The people I want to sing for our my family and close friends because they have a really always supported me.

✓ The people I want to sing for are my family and close friends because they have always really supported me.

The word 'our' is a pronoun error and should be 'are' to correctly link subject and predicate. Also, the adverb order 'really always' is incorrect; it should be 'always really'.

× I also want to sing for my future's loved ones becaused his mean a lot of me.

✓ I also want to sing for my future loved ones because they mean a lot to me.

The phrase 'future's loved ones' is incorrect; 'future loved ones' is correct. 'Becaused' is a typo for 'because'. 'His' is an incorrect pronoun here; 'they' should be used to refer to 'loved ones'. Also, 'mean a lot of me' should be 'mean a lot to me'.

× Singing for them is way to show my love and appreciation. Appreciation.

✓ Singing for them is a way to show my love and appreciation.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'way'. The repeated word 'Appreciation.' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Yes, I think singing can definitely brings happiness to people because it's spread emotions and make people feel more Alexis.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it spreads emotions and makes people feel more relaxed.

The verbs 'brings', 'spread', and 'make' are incorrectly conjugated. After modal 'can', the base form 'bring' should be used. 'It's' should be 'it' as the subject. 'Spread' should be 'spreads' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Alexis' is likely a typo for 'relaxed'.

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✓ For example, many traditional songs are used in spiritual ceremonies to uplift the spirit and bring joy, as singing with others can improve mood and response.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. It lacks proper sentence structure and coherence. The correction provides a clearer, grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.