唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'help' nên là 'helps', 'seen' nên là 'sing', và 'riff fest' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. I often sing with my friends and family, and this activity makes me feel happier and more refreshed.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'learn' nên là 'learned', 'chain' có thể là 'chance', và câu nên được nối lại để tránh câu ngắn rời rạc. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện ý rõ ràng.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing before because I have never had the chance to take singing lessons. However, I am quite interested in music and sometimes try to sing for fun at home.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I want to sing for my family because singing together makes us feel closer and happier. I enjoy sharing special moments with them through music, and I believe my songs can bring joy to them.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng và logic hơn.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing for my family, I can see their smiles and feel the joy it brings to us all.

× Yes, I like singing because it help me relax when I feel stressed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' for third person singular subjects.

× I often seen with my friends and family and this activity makes me feel happier and more riff fest.

✓ I often sing with my friends and family and this activity makes me feel happier and more refreshed.

The word 'seen' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing' to match the context. Also, 'riff fest' seems to be a typo and should be 'refreshed'. The verb 'sing' is in the present tense to match 'often'.

× No, I haven't learn how to sing before.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing before.

After 'haven't', the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Learn' is the base form; the correct past participle is 'learned' (or 'learnt' in British English).

× Because I have never had the chain to take singing lesson, however.

✓ Because I have never had the chance to take singing lessons, however.

The word 'chain' is a typo and should be 'chance'. Also, 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match the context. The sentence structure is awkward; 'however' is better placed at the beginning of a new sentence.

× I am quite interrested in music and sometimes try to sing for fun at home.

✓ I am quite interested in music and sometimes try to sing for fun at home.

The word 'interrested' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'interested'.

× Because singing together make us feel.

✓ Because singing together makes us feel.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing together'.

× Closer and happier, I enjoy serving a special moment with them Pro music and I believe my short can bring your Ann Reid.

✓ Closer and happier, I enjoy sharing special moments with them through music and I believe my song can bring you happiness.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'serving' should be 'sharing'; 'Pro music' should be 'through music'; 'short' should be 'song'; 'your Ann Reid' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'your happiness'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I think for my family I can see my family for you happy an Easthampton my family clothes.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I think of my family I can see my family happy and enjoying their clothes.

The phrase 'think for my family' should be 'think of my family'. 'For you happy an Easthampton my family clothes' is unclear; corrected to 'happy and enjoying their clothes' to make sense. The sentence is adjusted to proper present tense and clarity.