唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有多处发音和用词错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“leaves my mood”应为“lifts my mood”。建议注意发音准确性和词汇的正确使用，同时避免语法错误。回答应更简洁，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my anxiety after a busy day. Singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and makes me feel happy. For example, whenever I feel stressed, singing cheers me up and makes me more positive.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议用完整句子回答问题，并且说明具体情况。

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I took a singing class in middle school, which helped me understand the basics.

建議: 回答中语法和词汇错误严重，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达想法，注意词汇的正确使用和句子结构。

範例: I would like to sing for my mom because she loves songs very much. Although I am not a good singer, she is always patient and listens to me carefully.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can help people relieve stress and bring happiness. Also, songs can make parties more lively and help people feel more engaged.

× I really enjoy seeing because it helps me relax and reduce my anxiety after busy day.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce my anxiety after a busy day.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，原句中seeing应为singing，且缺少冠词a。

× after busy day.

✓ after a busy day.

day前缺少不定冠词a，表示“一天”。

× Singing my favorite songs leaves my mood and gives me a sense of happiness.

✓ Singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and gives me a sense of happiness.

动词leaves用法错误，应使用lift表示“提升心情”。

× For instance with whenever I feel stressed, seen always cheer me up and makes me feel more positive.

✓ For instance, whenever I feel stressed, singing always cheers me up and makes me feel more positive.

句中with使用错误，应去掉；seen应为singing；主谓一致错误，cheer应为cheers。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn的过去分词在美式英语中通常为learned，learnt为英式英语，视语境选择。

× Exactly no. But. In my middle school. We have a sync class.

✓ Exactly no. But in my middle school, we had a singing class.

句子断裂，缺少连贯性；sync应为singing；时态应为过去时had。

× Maybe my mom because my mom where like my sons very much.

✓ Maybe my mom because my mom likes my songs very much.

where用错，应为likes；sons应为songs。

× I doubt I can seem very well, but when I seen a song she can always.

✓ I doubt I can sing very well, but when I sing a song, she can always...

seem用错，应为sing；seen应为sing；句子不完整，需补充。

× Patient to listen and. Say some words.

✓ Patiently listen and say some words.

patient为形容词，需用副词patiently修饰动词listen。

× Oh definitely saying not only can help people relieve their stress, but also singing or songs can.

✓ Oh definitely, singing not only can help people relieve their stress, but also songs can.

saying用错，应为singing；句子结构需调整。

× As a prot log to make more people engaged.

✓ It is a good way to make more people engaged.

prot log无意义，应改为完整表达；句子结构不完整。

× Party when you join a party.

✓ Especially when you join a party.

Party用法错误，应为especially表示“尤其是”。