唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding short, fragmented sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for your opinion.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is a wonderful talent that can change my mood and make me feel better. Whenever I sing, I feel happier and more relaxed, which is why I love it so much.

建議: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use complete sentences and explain your experience clearly with appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing by taking classes with a vocal coach. These lessons have helped me improve my singing skills significantly.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoiding hesitation. Clarify your ideas and express them in complete sentences.

範例: I have always wanted to sing for my parents because they are my biggest supporters. I would also like to write some songs for them to show my appreciation and love.

建議: Improve your answer by correcting minor errors and using linking words to connect your ideas clearly and naturally.

範例: I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people because it changes their mood and makes them feel better. Moreover, it can unite people, which is a wonderful effect.

× Like singing.

✓ I like singing.

The sentence 'Like singing.' is incomplete because it lacks a subject. In English, a complete sentence requires at least a subject and a verb. Adding 'I' as the subject completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× They called them.

✓ They are called vocalists.

The sentence 'They called them.' is unclear and incorrectly uses pronouns. The intended meaning is to explain what the singing coaches are called. The correct form is 'They are called vocalists.' to properly introduce the term and use the correct pronouns.

× Vocalists like a vocal coach.

✓ A vocal coach is like a vocalist.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. To clarify the relationship, it should be rephrased as 'A vocal coach is like a vocalist.' to correctly use articles and pronouns and convey the intended meaning.

× And that helps me.

✓ That helps me.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be considered a sentence fragment. Removing 'And' makes the sentence more formal and grammatically correct.

× It helps me a lot like.

✓ It helps me a lot.

The word 'like' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete. Removing 'like' corrects the sentence structure.

× To learn to sing.

✓ It helps me to learn to sing.

The phrase 'To learn to sing.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'It helps me' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I always wanted to sing for my parents.

✓ I have always wanted to sing for my parents.

The phrase 'I always wanted' suggests a completed action in the past, but the intended meaning is a desire continuing up to now. Using the present perfect tense 'I have always wanted' correctly expresses this ongoing desire.

× 'Cause they're my biggest supporters.

✓ Because they are my biggest supporters.

Using the contraction ''Cause' is informal and incomplete. Replacing it with 'Because' makes the sentence formal and complete. Also, expanding 'they're' to 'they are' improves clarity.

× So I would like to sing for them and probably maybe write some songs for them too so I can sing for them and.

✓ So I would like to sing for them and probably write some songs for them too so I can sing for them and show them my support.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'show them my support' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Show them their support.

✓ Show them my support.

The phrase 'Show them their support' is incorrect because 'their' refers to the supporters, not the person showing support. Using 'my support' correctly indicates that the speaker is showing support to them.

× What can?

✓ What can I do?

The phrase 'What can?' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I do' completes the question and makes it grammatically correct.

× I definitely think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect word choice. The correct word is 'singing' to match the context of the conversation.