唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议你使用简单且正确的句子表达自己的观点，并避免重复。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my singing abilities. I feel shy when singing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法问题，表达不够清晰。建议你用正确的词汇和句型，简洁明了地说明学习唱歌的经历和原因。

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger because I enjoyed music. However, it was difficult for me to improve, so I stopped. Now, I prefer listening to music because I am not confident in my singing.

建議: 你的回答中有很多不连贯和错误的表达，导致意思不清楚。建议你用简单的句子直接回答问题，并说明原因。

範例: I want to sing for my family because I feel more confident with them. Singing in public is difficult for me, so I prefer to sing at home where I feel comfortable.

建議: 回答中有大量语法和词汇错误，表达混乱，难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Singing helps us express our emotions and feel relaxed and comfortable.

× No, I don't really slicing it 'cause I am not confident.

✓ No, I don't really like singing because I am not confident.

这里动词形式错误，'slicing' 应该用动名词形式 'singing'，且前面需要动词 'like' 来搭配。动词 + -ing 形式用来表示喜欢的动作。

× I feel shy when saying inflam of others, so I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

✓ I feel shy when singing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

短语 'inflam of others' 是错误的，正确表达应为 'in front of others'，表示在别人面前。

× Yes, I learned how to say when I was younger becauses I enjoyed the music.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger because I enjoyed the music.

动词 'say' 用错，应为 'sing'，且 'becauses' 拼写错误，应为 'because'。

× Now I prefer listening to music rather than saying 'cause I'm not very confident in my singing abilities.

✓ Now I prefer listening to music rather than singing because I'm not very confident in my singing abilities.

动词 'saying' 用错，应为 'singing'，且 'cause' 应为 'because'，表示原因。

× Yes, I want to sing for my family because I feel more confident. Double performing inflamm of them.

✓ Yes, I want to sing for my family because I feel more confident performing in front of them.

句子中 'Double performing inflamm of them' 无意义，正确表达应为 'performing in front of them'，表示在他们面前表演。

× Since I am asking us right person, it was sometimes difficulty for me to sing confidently in public.

✓ Since I am not the right person, it is sometimes difficult for me to sing confidently in public.

句子中 'asking us right person' 语法错误，正确表达应为 'not the right person'，且 'difficulty' 应为形容词 'difficult'。

× Therefore, I prefer to sing at the family scaffolding when I feel it less and support E.

✓ Therefore, I prefer to sing with my family when I feel less nervous and supported.

'family scaffolding' 用词错误，应为 'with my family'，且句子结构混乱，需调整表达。

× Yes, I think singing can definitely pulling happynest through people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

动词 'pulling' 用错，应为动词原形 'bring'，因为情态动词 'can' 后接动词原形。

× Wendy's singing it helps us impress our emotions and feel more did last for some post saying candidus Jess and may ask for more soulful and comfortable.

✓ Singing helps us express our emotions and feel more relaxed and comfortable.

句子结构混乱，'Wendy's singing it helps us impress our emotions' 不通顺，改为 'Singing helps us express our emotions' 更符合语法和表达。