唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma dherai repetition cha ra sentence haru clear chaina. Tapai le prashna ko sidha jawab dinu parcha ra sentence haru chhoto ra prabhavit banau. Arko kura, tapai le thulo shabda prayog garna saknuhunchha tara context anusar matra.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Singing helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

建議: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma confusion cha. Tapai le sidha ra spashta sentence haru banau, ra linking words jastai 'because' ya 'so' prayog garera kura bujhna sajilo banau.

範例: Yes, I have recently started learning to sing. I usually spend some hours watching YouTube videos that teach singing techniques used by professional singers.

建議: English (Nepal): Tapai le prashna bujhna garo bhayo jasto cha, tara tapai le sidha ra spashta jawab dinu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru chhoto ra prabhavit banau ra unnecessary words hataunu parcha.

範例: I want to sing for my girlfriend in the future. Currently, I am practicing to improve my singing skills.

建議: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma repetition ra sentence incomplete cha. Tapai le sidha ra spashta sentence haru banau ra linking words jastai 'because' ra 'so' prayog garera kura bujhna sajilo banau.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their worries for a while.

× Sing. I yes, I like to sing a song.

✓ Yes, I like to sing songs.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sing.' is not a complete sentence. Also, 'a song' is less natural here; 'songs' is more appropriate when talking about liking singing in general. The correction forms a complete, clear sentence.

× Yeah, yes, I like to sing a song because, because it, it makes me feel happy. It makes me feel happy and happy and happy and relax. Happy, happy and relaxed. Some happiness.

✓ Yes, I like to sing songs because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Repetition of 'happy' and 'because' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' to correctly describe the feeling. The correction removes redundancy and uses proper adjective forms.

× Yeah, I've been learning a singing recently.

✓ Yes, I've been learning singing recently.

The phrase 'a singing' is incorrect; 'singing' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. The present perfect continuous tense 'I've been learning' is correct for recent ongoing action.

× I usually I use I use allows some hours in Utah.

✓ I usually spend some hours practicing in Utah.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated pronouns and unclear wording. 'Allows some hours' is incorrect; 'spend some hours' is appropriate. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I was in like watching in YouTube with give me like how to performance as like professional singers.

✓ I was watching YouTube videos that teach me how to perform like professional singers.

Incorrect prepositions 'in' and awkward phrasing 'with give me like' are corrected. 'Watching YouTube videos' is the correct expression, and the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Oh, sorry, I'm I'm really sorry. I did. I did not understand. So that's why I say George move like I I mean I I said you said like the who's your favorite scene Looks like I'm so sorry and I want to sing for like my girlfriend in future. Now I'm practicing.

✓ Oh, sorry, I'm really sorry. I did not understand your question. You asked who my favorite singer is, right? I'm so sorry. I want to sing for my girlfriend in the future. Now I'm practicing.

The original sentence is fragmented, repetitive, and unclear. It contains many filler words and incorrect phrases. The correction organizes the sentences logically, removes repetitions, and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I believe I believe singing and bring a happiness to people because because it is because it it helps to relax in a relaxed and happy like people are people forgot like worries. People are people forward forward of people follow worries and when I.

✓ Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because it helps them relax and feel happy. People forget their worries when they sing.

The original sentence has repeated words, incorrect verb forms, and unclear pronoun references. 'Singing and bring' should be 'singing brings'. The correction uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer pronouns, and removes redundancy.