唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неправильное использование слов, например, 'literally love seeing' вместо 'really love singing'. Также предложение не структурировано логично, и отсутствуют связующие слова. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и связки для плавности речи.

範例: I really love singing because it has improved my vocal skills and makes me feel much happier than before.

建議: В ответе есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении, например, 'vocal lessons is my average lessons'. Следует использовать правильные артикли и согласование числительных. Также стоит связать предложения для лучшей связности.

範例: Currently, I am studying for my bachelor's degree at a music university, so vocal lessons are part of my regular courses, and I take them every week.

建議: Ответ содержит множество грамматических ошибок и неправильное использование слов, например, 'I'm seeing for' вместо 'I usually sing for'. Также предложения не связаны логически. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и связки.

範例: Usually, I sing for my vocal teacher, who analyzes my vocal skills and gives me good advice on how to improve.

建議: В ответе много ошибок в грамматике и лексике, например, 'It's a wonderful questions' и 'Zeds bring us together our all around the world'. Следует использовать правильные формы слов и более точные выражения, а также связки для логичности.

範例: That's a wonderful question. Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because music unites us all around the world, and when we share music with each other, it improves our emotions.

× I'm literally love seeing because it's improved my vocal skills and helps me.

✓ I literally love singing because it has improved my vocal skills and helps me.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' instead of 'seeing'. Also, 'it's improved' should be 'it has improved' to correctly use the present perfect tense.

× Feel so much happier than I ever before.

✓ I feel so much happier than I ever did before.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' and the phrase 'ever before' requires a past tense verb 'did' to complete the comparison properly.

× Currently I'm studying for my bachelor degree in music university so vocal lessons is my average lessons.

✓ Currently I'm studying for my bachelor's degree at a music university, so vocal lessons are my regular lessons.

'Bachelor degree' should be possessive 'bachelor's degree'. 'Music university' needs an article 'a'. 'Vocal lessons' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. 'Average lessons' is unclear; 'regular lessons' is more appropriate.

× And I take it every week.

✓ And I take them every week.

'Vocal lessons' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× Usually I'm seeing for my vocal teacher, she analyzing my vocal skills and give me some good advice is the about how to improve my skills.

✓ Usually I'm singing for my vocal teacher; she analyzes my vocal skills and gives me some good advice about how to improve my skills.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' to match the context. 'She analyzing' should be 'she analyzes' (third person singular present). 'Give' should be 'gives' for subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'is the about' is incorrect and should be removed.

× It's a wonderful questions.

✓ It's a wonderful question.

'Questions' is plural, but 'a' is singular article; the noun should be singular 'question' to match the article.

× Of course singing can bring happiness to people because music is a thing.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because music is a universal language.

The phrase 'music is a thing' is vague and awkward; replacing it with 'music is a universal language' improves clarity and meaning.

× Zeds bring us together our all around the world, and when we share music to each other, we improve our feelings.

✓ It brings us all together around the world, and when we share music with each other, we improve our feelings.

'Zeds' is unclear and likely a typo; replacing with 'It' refers to music. 'Our all around the world' is incorrect word order; correct is 'all around the world'. 'Share music to each other' should be 'share music with each other'.