唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
So to be honest, I really love singing. But there's a problem that I'm not really good at it. So for example, whenever I sing, my family always told me to stop. I don't know why, but I think that I'm not really good at it.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
So since I was a kid I have already known that I'm really not not really good at singing and also my family conditions is not really good so I don't have any chance to learn how to sing.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I want to sing for everyone, like my close friends, my family's or my relatives but you know I'm a bit embraced whenever I sing so I. They like I don't have any. Chance to.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Of course it is 'cause like I, I'm also. Audience. Uhm, so whenever I heard the song that like I really like, I feel really relaxed and.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài dòng và lặp lại ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I'm not very confident in my skills, so my family often asks me to stop singing.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 60.0建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ lý do bạn chưa học hát.
範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I realized early on that I wasn't very good at it, and my family's financial situation didn't allow me to take singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 55.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để diễn đạt ý muốn hát cho ai và cảm xúc của bạn khi hát.
範例: I would like to sing for my close friends and family because they are supportive. However, I often feel embarrassed when I sing, so I rarely get the chance to perform for them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 50.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp lý do cụ thể vì sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc.
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because when I listen to songs I enjoy, I feel relaxed and uplifted.
文法
× So since I was a kid I have already known that I'm really not not really good at singing and also my family conditions is not really good so I don't have any chance to learn how to sing.
✓ So since I was a kid I have already known that I'm really not good at singing and also my family's condition was not really good so I didn't have any chance to learn how to sing.
The sentence incorrectly uses 'have already known' which is awkward in this context; 'have known' is better. Also, 'family conditions is' is incorrect because 'family' is singular and 'conditions' is plural; it should be 'family's condition was' to match singular possessive and past tense. 'Don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency.
× and also my family conditions is not really good so I don't have any chance to learn how to sing.
✓ and also my family's condition was not really good so I didn't have any chance to learn how to sing.
The phrase 'family conditions is' is incorrect because 'family' is singular and 'conditions' is plural; the correct form is 'family's condition' (singular possessive) and the verb should agree in singular form 'was'.
× I want to sing for everyone, like my close friends, my family's or my relatives but you know I'm a bit embraced whenever I sing so I. They like I don't have any. Chance to.
✓ I want to sing for everyone, like my close friends, my family, or my relatives, but you know I'm a bit embarrassed whenever I sing, so I don't have any chance to.
The sentence has pronoun confusion and incomplete fragments. 'My family's' should be 'my family' without possessive. 'Embraced' is incorrect; the correct word is 'embarrassed'. The fragments 'so I. They like I don't have any. Chance to.' are incomplete and should be combined into a coherent sentence.
× I'm a bit embraced whenever I sing
✓ I'm a bit embarrassed whenever I sing
'Embraced' is a verb meaning to hug, but the intended meaning is feeling shy or self-conscious, so the correct adjective is 'embarrassed'.
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