唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar phrases like "enjoy myself" and instead provide a more varied explanation with specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day.

建議: There are some pronunciation and word choice errors, such as "sync" instead of "sing." Also, the answer could be more structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I have tried to learn how to sing, but it was challenging at first. However, I am eager to improve my skills and continue practicing.

建議: Your answer is thoughtful and shows personal opinion, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your reasoning using linking words for coherence.

範例: I would like to sing for myself because I believe that my own opinion about my singing matters the most.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "B side." Also, the explanation is a bit confusing. Try to use correct grammar, clearer vocabulary, and linking words to make your answer more coherent and specific.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because happy songs and meaningful lyrics can uplift people's moods and emotions.

× Yes, I tried to learn how to sync, however it didn't go well.

✓ Yes, I tried to learn how to sing, however it didn't go well.

The word 'sync' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects the verb form, it is corrected to 'sing' which is the base form of the verb used after 'to'.

× But I am willing to learn how to sync and develop myself.

✓ But I am willing to learn how to sing and develop myself.

Again, 'sync' is incorrect and should be 'sing'. The verb after 'to' should be in base form, so 'sing' is correct here.

× That's a difficult question because I don't have someone in my mind right now, but if I have to choose one person, it would be me because I think that the only opinion that matters is my opinion.

✓ That's a difficult question because I don't have anyone in mind right now, but if I have to choose one person, it would be me because I think that the only opinion that matters is my opinion.

The phrase 'someone in my mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'anyone in mind'. 'Anyone' is used in negative and interrogative contexts and fits better here. Also, 'in my mind' is more natural as 'in mind' in this context.

× Yes, I think it's depends on the song and the song lyrics.

✓ Yes, I think it depends on the song and the song lyrics.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb and should not be used with 'it is'. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'is'.

× So as people think a happy song they will automatically feel happy and if they think a sad song they will automatically. B side.

✓ So if people think it's a happy song, they will automatically feel happy, and if they think it's a sad song, they will automatically feel sad.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'B side' is incorrect and likely a typo. The sentence is corrected to a clear conditional structure with proper clauses and verbs.

× So it depends on the way. They choose the song.

✓ So it depends on the way they choose the song.

The sentence is incorrectly split into two fragments. Combining them into one sentence corrects the structure and improves clarity.