唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of saying "Whenever I sing a song I feel stressed, free," you could say "Whenever I sing, I feel relaxed and free."

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood whenever I feel stressed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and confusing phrases. Focus on giving a clear and direct response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid mentioning unrelated details without explanation. For example, explain what you mean by "convert" and clearly state that you are currently taking online singing classes.

範例: I have not formally learned how to sing before, but now I want to improve. Currently, I am taking online singing classes through various apps like Indian Idol.

建議: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, capitalize proper nouns correctly. For example, say "She is the one who always motivates and encourages me to polish my hidden talent."

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she is the person who always motivates and encourages me to develop my hidden talents.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, "Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because when they sing their favourite songs, they feel relaxed and their mood improves."

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because when they sing their favourite songs, they feel relaxed and their mood improves.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learn' in the present perfect tense should use the past participle form 'learned' (American English) or 'learnt' (British English). Both are acceptable, but consistency is important. Here, 'learned' is preferred for clarity and standard usage.

× I did not learn how to sing, but now I want to convert.

✓ I did not learn how to sing, but now I want to change.

The verb 'convert' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'change' or 'improve'. 'Convert' is not appropriate in this context, so replacing it with 'change' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× Now I want to learn how to sing and I'm taking.

✓ Now I want to learn how to sing and I'm taking classes.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I'm taking' requires an object. Adding 'classes' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Now I'm taking the classes of singing through online platforms.

✓ Now I'm taking singing classes through online platforms.

The phrase 'classes of singing' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'singing classes'. Also, 'through online platforms' is acceptable, but 'on online platforms' is more common.

× There are many apps are available for singing and it's a. Song, India Song and Indian Idol.

✓ There are many apps available for singing, such as Song, India Song, and Indian Idol.

The sentence has redundancy ('are many apps are') and incomplete structure ('it's a. Song'). Removing redundancy and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I really want to sing for my mother because she was the one.

✓ I really want to sing for my mother because she is the one.

The tense should be present ('is') because the mother is still the person motivating the student. Using 'was' implies past tense, which is incorrect here.

× She's the one person who always motivate and encouraged, encouraged me to Polish my hidden talent.

✓ She's the one person who always motivates and encourages me to polish my hidden talent.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'motivates' and 'encourages' for third person singular. Also, 'Polish' should be lowercase 'polish' as it is not a proper noun.

× Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

✓ Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Whenever a person sing her favorite he his or her favorite song they they feel very relaxed and it lived his or her mood.

✓ Whenever a person sings his or her favorite song, they feel very relaxed and it lifts his or her mood.

The verb 'sing' should be 'sings' to agree with singular subject 'a person'. The phrase 'he his or her' is redundant; 'his or her' suffices. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'Lived' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lifts' to indicate present tense action.