唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议用简单明了的句子直接表达观点，并避免语法错误。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my voice. Even when I am alone, I prefer not to sing.

建議: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯，缺乏具体细节。建议用简洁的句子说明是否学过唱歌，并提供具体细节。

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I only had some basic lessons in primary school, but mostly I just watched music movies.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，说明想为谁唱歌，并用连贯的句子表达。

範例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends, but only quietly because I am not very good at singing.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，意思不够明确。建议用清晰的句子表达观点，并举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because music helps people relax and express their feelings. Even songs without lyrics can make people feel better.

× Well, I says L is not my thing.

✓ Well, I say singing is not my thing.

这里's是第三人称单数形式，但主语是第一人称I，应该用一般现在时的第一人称形式say。

× I'm quiet Tom day.

✓ I'm quite timid.

原句中'Tom day'无意义，推测想表达'quiet'的意思，应改为'quite timid'表示性格害羞。

× If so, I guess I can sing well and that's why I wouldn't say in front of others, even when I was alone.

✓ If so, I guess I can sing well and that's why I wouldn't sing in front of others, even when I was alone.

动词'say'用错，应该用'sing'，且'sing in front of others'是正确搭配。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learnt和learned都是learn的过去分词，learned更常用且标准。

× Completely not no.

✓ Not at all.

原句结构混乱，表达否定应简洁明了，使用'Not at all'更合适。

× I guess I have some basic lessons in primary school, but as with most of the time while while we have done is watch movies related to music, rather resented just how to sync.

✓ I guess I had some basic lessons in primary school, but most of the time what we did was watch movies related to music, rather than just how to sing.

时态应为过去时，'have'改为'had'；'resented'用错，应为'rather than'；'sync'应为'sing'。

× Well as I'm not good at it. I can sing.

✓ Well, as I'm not good at it, I can't sing.

前后句意思矛盾，'I can sing'应为'I can't sing'，符合语境。

× Any ones allowed to really like to think or maybe just in my friends or family members?

✓ Anyone allowed to really like to think, or maybe just my friends or family members?

'Any ones'应为'unanyone'，且句子结构不完整，需调整。

× First is when others saying I will sing in low volume.

✓ First, when others say so, I will sing in a low volume.

句子缺少主语和谓语，时态应为一般现在时，且'low volume'前需加冠词。

× Definitely can't and I believe Zell is why people love to chasing the singers and something related to music.

✓ Definitely can, and I believe that is why people love chasing singers and things related to music.

'can't'用错，应为'can'；'to chasing'应为'chasing'；'Zell'应为'that'。

× Even these music without lyrics, the reason of it can sometimes come people down and for those songs with lyrics you can fail the meaningful words.

✓ Even music without lyrics can sometimes bring people down, and for those songs with lyrics, you can feel the meaningful words.

'these music'应为'music'；'reason of it'用法错误；'come people down'应为'bring people down'；'fail'应为'feel'。