唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to give a clear and direct answer with simple sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reasons. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed or sad. Sometimes, I listen to different types of songs to improve my mood. Singing makes me feel better and more comfortable.

建議: Your answer needs to be more organized and clear. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words like 'but' or 'because'. Use correct vocabulary such as 'vocal cords' and avoid repetition. Keep sentences simple and coherent.

範例: I have not learned to sing professionally, but I often watch YouTube videos that teach singing techniques. These videos help me improve my vocal cords and practice different songs.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain why using linking words like 'because'. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me when I feel down. They appreciate my singing and never tease me.

建議: Your answer is too long and unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific supporting details using linking words like 'and' or 'because'. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas.

範例: Of course, singing can bring happiness. When I feel sad, I sing to relax and feel happy. My family and I often sing together when we meet, and it makes us enjoy the moment.

× Will I don't consider myself a great singer also singing is not cop of 90 however or whenever but whenever I feel are depressed and relaxation undepressed an traced all I usually seeing this song you really single song and it fills me better and relax.

✓ I don't consider myself a great singer. Also, singing is not my cup of tea. However, whenever I feel depressed and need relaxation, I usually sing this song. It is a really single song and it makes me feel better and relaxed.

The original sentence misuses 'Will' as a modal verb incorrectly and has unclear modal verb usage. The correction removes the incorrect 'Will' and uses appropriate modal verbs and expressions to convey ability and habitual actions. Modal verbs should be used correctly to express ability, possibility, or habitual actions.

× Sometimes I even tried using different types of songs.

✓ Sometimes I even try using different types of songs.

The question is about a general habit, so present tense is appropriate. Using past tense 'tried' suggests a completed action, but the context implies ongoing or habitual action. Therefore, present tense 'try' is correct.

× Learn how to sing we will know I want learn how to sing professionally, but I often was the videos in YouTube they teach a DTS Allstate is this singing technique about the singings how to sing the song but and these videos help me understand how to improve my vocal chords and vocal cords and practices different songs.

✓ I want to learn how to sing professionally, but I often watch videos on YouTube that teach singing techniques. These videos help me understand how to improve my vocal cords and practice different songs.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and tense usage. 'Was' is incorrect for the action of watching videos; 'watch' is the correct present tense verb. Also, 'practices' should be 'practice' to match the subject. Correct verb tense and form are necessary for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I often was the videos in YouTube they teach a DTS Allstate is this singing technique about the singings how to sing the song but and these videos help me understand how to improve my vocal chords and vocal cords and practices different songs.

✓ I often watch videos on YouTube that teach singing techniques, and these videos help me understand how to improve my vocal cords and practice different songs.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'YouTube'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to platforms like YouTube. Proper preposition use is important for natural and correct English.

× Will I think I want to sing song for my family about the family and then because they know whenever I feel down the encourage me in and each and every things and they will appreciate for my singing and they don't tease me with mine goes on does not happen.

✓ I think I want to sing songs for my family because they know whenever I feel down, they encourage me in everything. They will appreciate my singing and they don't tease me, so that does not happen.

The original sentence misuses pronouns like 'the' instead of 'they' and 'mine goes on' which is unclear. Correct pronoun use is essential for clarity and meaning. Also, 'sing song' should be 'sing songs' to match plural form.

× I think I want to sing song for my family about the family and then because they know whenever I feel down the encourage me in and each and every things and they will appreciate for my singing and they don't tease me with mine goes on does not happen.

✓ I think I want to sing songs for my family because they know whenever I feel down, they encourage me in everything. They will appreciate my singing and they don't tease me, so that does not happen.

The phrase 'sing song' is incorrect; it should be 'sing songs' to indicate plural. Also, 'each and every things' should be 'everything' as 'things' is plural and 'each and every' is used with singular nouns. Correct singular and plural forms improve grammatical accuracy.

× Of course, song whenever I feel the low and uh, I think uh, so I, I sing a song to be relaxed as well as to keep the hapiness in the my face and we gather it whenever we gather without frames as well as with my parents, we sing a song and enjoy the enjoy the nature as well.

✓ Of course, whenever I feel low, I sing a song to relax and to keep happiness on my face. Whenever we gather, whether with friends or my parents, we sing songs and enjoy nature as well.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has awkward phrasing. The correction removes unnecessary modal verbs and clarifies the meaning. Modal verbs should be used appropriately to express ability, possibility, or necessity.

× I sing a song to be relaxed as well as to keep the hapiness in the my face and we gather it whenever we gather without frames as well as with my parents, we sing a song and enjoy the enjoy the nature as well.

✓ I sing a song to relax and to keep happiness on my face. Whenever we gather, whether with friends or my parents, we sing songs and enjoy nature as well.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my face'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'without frames' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'with friends'. Correct preposition use is important for natural English.