唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it sound more natural and engaging. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep it concise.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a long day and instantly lifts my spirits, making me feel happier.

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit informal and slightly off-topic. Try to answer directly first, then add relevant details with linking words to improve coherence and naturalness.

範例: No, I haven't formally learnt how to sing, but I often listen to music on my phone, which inspires me to sing along occasionally.

建議: Your answer is quite long and a bit confusing due to some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to keep your answer concise, use clear sentences, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I don't usually sing for anyone in particular, but my girlfriend sometimes asks me to sing when we're on the phone, even though she says my voice isn't very good.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because concerts and songs often touch people's emotions, helping them feel connected and joyful.

× Sometimes when we're in call and I'm in a good mood and I'm singing with her, she just humbles me buying saying that I don't quite have a good voice.

✓ Sometimes when we're on a call and I'm in a good mood and I'm singing with her, she just humbles me by saying that I don't quite have a good voice.

The phrase 'in call' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to being engaged in a phone call. Also, 'buying' is a typo and should be 'by' to indicate the means by which she humbles me. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Indeed, be 'cause there are concerts. There are many other artists in the world who basically plays with the emotion of every individual fans be 'cause when everyone has their own.

✓ Indeed, because there are concerts. There are many other artists in the world who basically play with the emotions of every individual fan because everyone has their own.

The verb 'plays' should be 'play' to agree with the plural subject 'artists'. Also, 'fans' should be singular 'fan' to match 'every individual', and 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to reflect the variety of feelings. Additionally, 'be 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and proper noun usage.