唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons why you like singing.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. Since childhood, I've loved singing various songs, especially Hindi songs, because their rhythm and beautiful lyrics really attract me.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words to explain your points logically and provide specific details about your experience with singing.

範例: To be honest, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't have a melodious voice. However, I enjoy singing in the bathroom as it helps me relax both mentally and emotionally.

建議: Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide more specific reasons or examples about who you like to sing for.

範例: I usually sing to relax my mind and emotions. Besides that, I sing whenever I have free time to entertain myself.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Avoid negative statements without explanation and use linking words to present your ideas logically. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

範例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people's lives. Even if someone doesn't have a melodious voice, singing can still be enjoyable and uplifting. Moreover, good singers can entertain others with their voice and meaningful lyrics.

× Since my childhood I like to sing different kinds of songs, for example Punjabi song, English songs and mostly Hindi songs because they have more rhythm and rhymes and beautiful lyrics which I attract which attract me a lot.

✓ Since my childhood I like to sing different kinds of songs, for example Punjabi songs, English songs and mostly Hindi songs because they have more rhythm and rhymes and beautiful lyrics which attract me a lot.

The word 'Punjabi song' should be plural 'Punjabi songs' to match the plural form used for 'English songs' and 'Hindi songs'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). Consistency in plural forms is important for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because they have more rhythm and rhymes and beautiful lyrics which I attract which attract me a lot.

✓ because they have more rhythm and rhymes and beautiful lyrics which attract me a lot.

The phrase 'which I attract' is incorrect because 'attract' is a verb that requires an object. The correct form is 'which attract me a lot' where 'which' refers to 'lyrics' and 'attract' is used correctly. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× To be honest, I did not learn about the singing.

✓ To be honest, I did not learn singing.

The phrase 'did not learn about the singing' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'learn' should be followed directly by the object 'singing' without 'about the'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) related to verb usage and sentence structure.

× Because I do not have melodious voice, but definitely I'm a bathroom single handle singing helps me to relax my mind and.

✓ Because I do not have a melodious voice, but definitely I'm a bathroom singer; singing helps me to relax my mind and.

The phrase 'melodious voice' needs the article 'a' before it (article error, ID 22). Also, 'bathroom single handle' is incorrect; it should be 'bathroom singer' to refer to a person who sings in the bathroom. This correction addresses singular/plural and article usage (IDs 1 and 22).

× Body. And emotionally also.

✓ Body and emotionally also.

The original sentence fragments 'Body. And emotionally also.' are incomplete and incorrectly punctuated. They should be combined into one sentence for clarity. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× So I love to sing but did not get any lessons.

✓ So I love to sing but did not get any lessons.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense usage; no correction needed.

× Well, I love to sing for relaxing my mind.

✓ Well, I love to sing to relax my mind.

The phrase 'for relaxing my mind' is awkward. The correct form is 'to relax my mind' using the infinitive form to express purpose. This is a present tense issue (ID 6) related to verb form usage.

× An emotionally also to relax myself emotionally.

✓ And emotionally also to relax myself emotionally.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And'. This is a sentence structure and spelling issue (ID 26).

× Apart from this, whenever I get time at that time I sang to entertain myself.

✓ Apart from this, whenever I get time, I sing to entertain myself.

The verb 'sang' is past tense, but the sentence refers to habitual action, so present tense 'sing' is correct. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× Absolutely, singing bring hapiness, happiness to everyone's life.

✓ Absolutely, singing brings happiness to everyone's life.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'.

× Sometimes anyone do not have melodious voice.

✓ Sometimes anyone does not have a melodious voice.

The auxiliary verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'anyone' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Also, 'a' is needed before 'melodious voice' (article error, ID 22). This relates to modal verb usage and subject-verb agreement (ID 4 and 27).

× In that case also other people laugh on that person.

✓ In that case, other people also laugh at that person.

The correct preposition with 'laugh' is 'at', not 'on'. Also, 'also' is better placed after 'people' for natural flow. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Oh, however, if anybody have good voice in that case also people entertained by their singing and lyrics and.

✓ Oh, however, if anybody has a good voice, in that case people are also entertained by their singing and lyrics.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'anybody' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'Good voice' needs the article 'a' (article error, ID 22). The phrase 'people entertained' needs auxiliary verb 'are' to form passive voice correctly (incorrect passive voice, ID 21). Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.