唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response first, then add specific reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences short and natural.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. When I was a child, I often sang in the bathroom because it was a private place. Singing refreshes my mind and lifts my mood, so I enjoy it very much.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly whether you have learnt singing or not, then explain briefly how you tried to learn. Use simple linking words like 'but' or 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons at school. However, I tried to learn singing by watching videos on YouTube. Although I sometimes forget the lyrics, I practice regularly to improve my skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Try to answer directly who you want to sing for and why, using simple and clear sentences. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on expressing your feelings clearly.

範例: If I get the chance, I would like to sing for my mother. She is very kind and supportive, and singing for her would make me happy and show my gratitude.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear sentences and grammar errors. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain why singing brings happiness using simple and logical sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy life. When people sing or listen to music, they feel joyful and it can improve their mood.

× Yeah, I'm not.

✓ Yeah, I don't.

The sentence uses 'I'm not' incorrectly to express negation of liking singing. The correct modal verb usage is 'I don't' to indicate negation of the verb 'like'. In English, 'I am not' is used with adjectives or present participles, but here 'like' is a verb requiring 'do not' for negation.

× When I was a child, I used to like singing when I go washroom.

✓ When I was a child, I used to like singing when I went to the washroom.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past context 'used to'. Also, 'go washroom' is missing the preposition 'to' before 'washroom'.

× Then I decided to sing a song becauses there's filmy, A refreshment and I feel like delighted to sing a song in bash bar in bathroom.

✓ Then I decided to sing a song because there's a film, a refreshment, and I feel delighted to sing a song in the bathroom.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'filmy' is unclear and likely meant 'film'. The phrase 'bash bar in bathroom' is unclear and corrected to 'in the bathroom'. The conjunctions and articles are corrected for clarity.

× So that's why I love to sing.

✓ So that's why I love singing.

The verb 'love' is usually followed by the gerund form 'singing' rather than the infinitive 'to sing' in this context.

× As far as I remember I didn't go any school to learn music but when I listen music on YouTube then I sunk with the music and decided to learn how to sing the music and it a matics some moment while I can't remember the lead but I tried my best.

✓ As far as I remember, I didn't go to any school to learn music, but when I listened to music on YouTube, I sank into the music and decided to learn how to sing. It was a magical moment, though I can't remember the lead, but I tried my best.

The verbs 'listen' and 'sink' should be in past tense 'listened' and 'sank' to match the past narrative. 'Go any school' needs the preposition 'to'. The phrase 'it a matics some moment' is corrected to 'it was a magical moment' for clarity. Commas are added for sentence structure.

× Well, it's better for me to say but, but for me? If I get the opportunity, then I would definitely see a song for my mother because she's a very generous person whom I'd Edward He'll give me bored and I feel like I recently Hepburn barred from the.

✓ Well, it's hard for me to say, but if I get the opportunity, I would definitely sing a song for my mother because she's a very generous person who always supports me, and I feel grateful to her.

The sentence contains many unclear and incorrect phrases. 'See a song' is corrected to 'sing a song'. The modal verb 'would' is used correctly for hypothetical situations. The phrase 'whom I'd Edward He'll give me bored' is unclear and replaced with a meaningful phrase. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Yeah, yeah actually I think that singing can bring happiness to people becauses in our Walter laughing is more precious advanced life be 'cause if you can't happy, then you can never be the great opportunity to build a successful life So then I decided to sing song and listen to music because of my.

✓ Yeah, actually I think that singing can bring happiness to people because in our world, laughter is very precious. If you can't be happy, then you can never have the great opportunity to build a successful life. So I decided to sing songs and listen to music because of that.

The modal verb 'can' is used correctly. The sentence contains many unclear words like 'Walter' corrected to 'world', 'can't happy' corrected to 'can't be happy'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar. 'Sing song' corrected to 'sing songs'.