唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to correct grammatical errors and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, use 'Whenever I sing a song' instead of 'Whenever I singing a song'. Also, clarify 'it is also a one of my high' to a more natural expression like 'it is one of my favourite activities'. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and happy. Singing is one of my favourite activities when I want to unwind.

建議: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. For example, say 'I have never learned how to sing' instead of 'I have never learns learn sing'. Also, clarify your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally, but I believe singing is a natural talent. Since I enjoy listening to music, I think I have developed some basic singing skills.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use plural form 'family members' and correct spelling 'especially'. Also, clarify the second sentence to express appreciation more naturally, for example, 'My mother always appreciates when I sing for her'.

範例: I want to sing for my family members, especially my mother. She always appreciates it when I sing for her.

建議: Work on sentence structure and pronoun consistency. For example, say 'some people sing their favourite songs as a way to lift themselves up' instead of 'lift ourselves'. Also, use linking words properly and avoid comma splices.

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and free of stress. For example, some people sing their favourite songs to lift themselves up when they feel down.

× Whenever I singing a song I feel very relaxed and it is also a one of my high.

✓ Whenever I sing a song, I feel very relaxed and it is also one of my highs.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'Whenever I'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'a one of my high' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my highs' to express one of the things that make you happy.

× No, I have never learns learn sing, but I believe singing in the natural talent and I enjoy listening to music.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing, but I believe singing is a natural talent and I enjoy listening to music.

The verb 'learns' is incorrect for the first person singular; it should be 'learned'. Also, 'learn sing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learned to sing'. Additionally, 'singing in the natural talent' should be 'singing is a natural talent' to use the correct verb 'is'.

× So that's why I think and I think I have a little build skill in singing.

✓ So that's why I think I have a little built skill in singing.

The phrase 'a little build skill' is incorrect. The correct adjective form is 'built' to describe the skill. Also, the repeated 'I think' is redundant and can be omitted for clarity.

× I want to sing for my family member, specially for my mother.

✓ I want to sing for my family members, especially for my mother.

'Family member' should be plural 'family members' when referring to more than one person. Also, 'specially' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis.

× Whenever I think, my mother always appreciated me.

✓ Whenever I think, my mother always appreciates me.

'Appreciated' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'appreciates' is correct.

× Definitely, singing can bring happiness to the people because it helps them to feel relaxed and free of stress, As for example, some people sing their favorite song as a way to lift ourselves.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and free of stress. For example, some people sing their favorite songs as a way to lift themselves.

The phrase 'to the people' is better as 'to people' for generalization. 'Helps them to feel' can be simplified to 'helps them feel'. 'As for example' is incorrect; 'For example' is correct. 'Favorite song' should be plural 'favorite songs' to match 'some people'. 'Lift ourselves' is incorrect; it should be 'lift themselves' to match the subject 'some people'.