唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại hoặc nói lan man.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I don't consider myself a professional singer because I haven't had formal training.

建議: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh nói lan man hoặc lặp lại.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons before. I usually try to learn things by myself using the internet.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ để làm rõ ý.

範例: I don't usually sing for others because I feel shy. I prefer to sing alone when I am relaxed.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có ý chính, nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu đa dạng để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and enjoy themselves. Like music, singing can lift your mood and create a joyful atmosphere.

× I don't want you saying because I think that my boss articulated and also very crazy well.

✓ I don't want you to say that because I think that my boss articulated very crazily and very well.

The phrase 'want you saying' is incorrect; it should be 'want you to say' using the infinitive form after 'want'. Also, 'crazy well' is incorrect; the adverb form 'crazily' should be used to modify the verb 'articulated'.

× I used to think that I am the kind there who born to be a singer, but now I think that my voice is really, really ugly and not fit to be a singer.

✓ I used to think that I am the kind of person who was born to be a singer, but now I think that my voice is really, really ugly and not fit to be a singer.

The phrase 'the kind there who born' is incorrect. It should be 'the kind of person who was born' to correctly express the idea. 'Born' needs an auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past participle passive voice.

× Well, I never learned how to swim before I usually.

✓ Well, I have never learned how to sing before, usually.

The sentence is confusing and uses 'swim' instead of 'sing'. Also, 'before I usually' is incorrect. The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is appropriate for experience up to now.

× I usually learn Internet but.

✓ I usually learn from the Internet, but...

The phrase 'learn Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'learn from the Internet'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation or proper punctuation.

× But I hate to say nowadays so I never learned how to sing before.

✓ But I hate to say it nowadays, so I have never learned how to sing before.

The phrase 'never learned how to sing before' should use present perfect 'have never learned' to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'hate to say nowadays' is awkward; adding 'it' clarifies the object.

× No, I don't want to sing for anyone because I eat, I eat things.

✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone because I eat, I mean, I eat things.

The sentence is unclear and seems to misuse 'eat' possibly for 'mean'. Clarifying with 'I mean' helps correct the pronoun and expression usage.

× I born to be a singer so I think for everybody.

✓ I was born to be a singer, so I think for everybody.

'I born' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I was born' using past passive voice. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'so'.

× But now I realize it's not very pleasant so I don't I still sitting in front of any others anymore.

✓ But now I realize it's not very pleasant, so I don't sit in front of others anymore.

The phrase 'I don't I still sitting' is incorrect. It should be 'I don't sit'. Also, 'any others' is better as 'others' here. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, as I think they're saying, just like music.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, as they say, just like music.

'They're saying' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'they say' to express a general truth or common saying.

× So I think that singing can bring happiness to people as it brings you emotions and even can bring you some fun anyways to make you happy.

✓ So I think that singing can bring happiness to people as it brings emotions and can even bring some fun to make you happy.

The sentence is awkward and redundant. Removing 'you' after 'brings' and repositioning 'even' improves clarity and flow. 'Anyways' is informal and unnecessary here.