唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan terputus-putus. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan mengalir dengan baik, serta hindari pemisahan kalimat yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, gabungkan kalimat menjadi satu kalimat yang jelas dan alami.

範例: I don't really like singing because I think my voice is not very pleasant.

建議: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengucapan. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas untuk menyatakan bahwa Anda belum belajar menyanyi dan tidak berniat untuk belajar.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing, and I don't intend to learn it.

建議: Jawaban Anda singkat dan terputus-putus. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih lengkap dan alami dengan menggabungkan kalimat dan menambahkan sedikit penjelasan.

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not confident about my singing skills.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan banyak kalimat yang terputus. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lengkap dan logis dengan menggunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness and cheerfulness to people, especially when they sing together.

× I'm not really good at singing. Because my voice is. Not. Nice.

✓ I'm not really good at singing because my voice is not nice.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Because' should not start a new sentence; it should connect the two clauses into one complete sentence for clarity and correctness.

× No, I have not learned singing an eye. Not. Intend to. Singing.

✓ No, I have not learned to sing and do not intend to sing.

The original sentence contains incorrect phrases and fragmented structure. 'Learned singing an eye' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learned to sing'. Also, 'Not. Intend to. Singing.' is fragmented and should be combined into 'do not intend to sing' to express future intention properly.

× I don't want to sing for. Anyone.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone.

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period. It should be a single sentence without a period between 'for' and 'anyone' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Yes, I think so. Singing can bring happiness. Bring cheerful bring. Serene an most of people like. Do that. Especially. When there.

✓ Yes, I think so. Singing can bring happiness and cheerfulness. Most people like to do that, especially when there is music.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain incomplete thoughts. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves clarity. 'Bring cheerful bring. Serene an most of people like. Do that. Especially. When there.' is incoherent and needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning.