唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'students my mind and reef'. Try to keep your answer concise and clear, directly addressing the question with correct grammar. Use simple and natural expressions to explain why you like singing.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. Whenever I sing, I feel happy and peaceful, as if I am in my own world.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing such as 'assists me how to sing' and 'one of the member'. Try to use correct sentence structures and add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing at school. My music teacher often helped me improve my singing skills, and I was a member of the school's musical team.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more formal language and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid informal words like 'wanna' and try to be more specific about how singing expresses your feelings.

範例: I would love to sing for my best friend because she has always supported and motivated me during difficult times. I believe that music is the best way to express my love and respect for her.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'a site of courage'. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences with correct grammar and appropriate vocabulary to express your opinion.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Many people find joy and motivation in singing, as it helps them feel positive and encouraged.

× whenever I listen music I just enter in my own world of imagination

✓ whenever I listen to music I just enter my own world of imagination

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'enter' does not need the preposition 'in' here; it is used directly with the object 'my own world of imagination'. So, the correct phrase is 'listen to music' and 'enter my own world'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× where every single people loves me

✓ where every single person loves me

The word 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'every single' which requires a singular noun. The correct singular form is 'person'. Hence, 'every single person' is correct instead of 'every single people'.

× and it also students my mind and reef

✓ and it also soothes my mind and reliefs

The word 'students' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'soothes' meaning to calm. Also, 'reef' is incorrect; the correct word is 'relief' which means alleviation. The sentence needs correct adjectives/verbs to convey the intended meaning.

× my music teacher often assists me how to sing

✓ my music teacher often assisted me how to sing

The question is about past learning, so the verb should be in past tense 'assisted' instead of present 'assists'. This aligns the verb tense with the past context.

× I was one of the member of our musical team group in our school

✓ I was one of the members of our musical team group in our school

The phrase 'one of the member' is incorrect because 'one of the' must be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'members' is correct here.

× I wanna show my love and respect for her as I think music is the best way to do this

✓ I want to show my love and respect for her as I think music is the best way to do this

'Wanna' is informal and not appropriate in formal speaking tests. The correct modal verb phrase is 'want to'.

× there is nothing just more than singing that can bring people hapiness

✓ there is nothing more than singing that can bring people happiness

The word 'just' is unnecessary and incorrectly placed. Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'. The phrase 'there is nothing more than singing' is correct to express the intended meaning.

× There might not be any person who do not find singing a joy and a site of courage and motivation

✓ There might not be any person who does not find singing a joy and a source of courage and motivation

The relative clause subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'does' not 'do'. Also, 'site' is incorrect; the correct word is 'source' to mean origin or cause. This corrects subject-verb agreement and word choice.