唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'expense' should be 'relaxation' or 'stress relief'). Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions, whether I'm happy or sad. I sing every day during my free time, and even when I'm busy, singing helps me relax and relieve stress.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then add supporting details with clear linking words. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences to make your answer more effective and natural.

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I have watched some YouTube videos to learn basic techniques. However, I haven't studied singing in depth.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences and using linking words to make it more fluent and natural. Also, avoid filler words like 'Uhm' and incomplete sentences.

範例: I would like to sing for my mom because she has helped me a lot throughout my life, and singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude.

建議: Your answer has some unclear parts and repetition. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your points logically and choose appropriate vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. Moreover, singing can improve mood and even have positive effects on physical health.

× I really like singing and singing makes me express my emotions and my hapiness or my sadness.

✓ I really like singing and singing makes me express my emotions and my happiness or my sadness.

The word 'hapiness' is a misspelling of the adjective 'happiness'. Correct spelling is important for clarity and correctness.

× I actually sing every single day on my free time.

✓ I actually sing every single day in my free time.

The correct preposition to use with 'free time' is 'in', not 'on'. We say 'in my free time' to indicate when an activity happens.

× Also when I when I am busy, sometimes it's really good for expense. Expressing yourself.

✓ Also, when I am busy, sometimes it's really good for expressing yourself.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('when I when I'). Also, 'expense' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'expressing'. The corrected sentence combines the fragments and uses the correct word.

× New I never learned how to sing but I watched some YouTube videos for basic learning how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing but I have watched some YouTube videos for basic learning on how to sing.

'New' is a typo for 'No'. Also, the present perfect tense ('have never learned', 'have watched') is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now.

× But I never got in deeper with singing.

✓ But I never got deeper into singing.

The phrase 'got in deeper with' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'got deeper into' to indicate involvement or understanding.

× I just use it or No, no, I'm sorry, not use it, I.

✓ I just use it, or no, no, I'm sorry, I don't use it.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun and verb usage.

× Because she helped me, She helped me a lot.

✓ Because she helped me, she helped me a lot.

The pronoun 'She' should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence unless it starts a new sentence.

× On Mixart, people happy and it's really good for your feet.

✓ In music, people are happy and it's really good for your feet.

'On Mixart' is incorrect; likely intended 'in music'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'are' after 'people'. The phrase 'good for your feet' is unclear but kept as is since it may be idiomatic or intended.