唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more natural and concise. For example, say directly if you like singing or not, and explain why briefly. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'anheim the music'.

範例: I don't usually like singing in front of others, but I enjoy singing alone in the bathroom because it helps me relax.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'Anne used to sing the lyrics with that. Meet.'

範例: Yes, I learned singing as a child. I attended music classes where I practiced singing and played the harmonium to accompany the songs.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to respond directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your feelings or reasons.

範例: I would love to sing for my loved ones because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more specific about how singing brings happiness.

範例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel connected with others, which improves their mood.

× I don't like singing but yes I am a bathroom singer so I often don't sing around people but when I'm alone I do sing anheim the music.

✓ I don't like singing but yes I am a bathroom singer so I often don't sing around people but when I'm alone I do sing along with the music.

The phrase 'do sing anheim the music' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'do sing along with the music' where 'sing along with' is the proper verb + -ing form usage to express singing together with music.

× Yes. When I was a child, I used to go for music classes and I practice singing there.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I used to go for music classes and I practiced singing there.

The sentence mixes past tense 'used to go' with present tense 'practice'. Both actions happened in the past, so 'practice' should be in past tense 'practiced' to maintain tense consistency.

× I played harmonium. Anne used to sing the lyrics with that. Meet.

✓ I played the harmonium. Anne used to sing the lyrics with it.

The sentence 'Anne used to sing the lyrics with that. Meet.' is fragmented and unclear. 'Meet' is out of context and should be removed. Also, 'the harmonium' needs the definite article 'the'. 'That' should be replaced with 'it' to correctly refer to the harmonium.

× I would love to sing for my loved ones or are on. Their bodies.

✓ I would love to sing for my loved ones or for anyone. Their bodies.

The phrase 'or are on. Their bodies.' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. It should be 'or for anyone' to make sense. 'Their bodies' is disconnected and should be removed or clarified.

× I would like to sing about this song for them.

✓ I would like to sing this song for them.

The phrase 'sing about this song' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'sing this song' when referring to performing a song for someone.

× Yes, singing and bring happiness to people as it is a great way to express emotions and also you feel connected with each other and it brings happiness in your mind.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people as it is a great way to express emotions and also you feel connected with each other and it brings happiness to your mind.

The phrase 'singing and bring happiness' is incorrect; it should be 'singing can bring happiness' to correctly use the modal verb 'can' with the base verb. Also, 'brings happiness in your mind' should be 'brings happiness to your mind' to use the correct preposition.