唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "in front the block audience" nên là "in front of a large audience". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "I think" và "I often". Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, súc tích trong 4-5 câu.

範例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence in my ability. Whenever I have to perform in front of a large audience, I feel shy and nervous. However, I love listening to music since it helps me relax and enjoy melodies without any pressure.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "when there was a child" nên là "when I was a child" và "after short time" nên là "after a short time". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi nhỏ về cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

範例: I learned how to sing when I was a child, but I gave up after a short time because I didn't see much improvement despite practicing hard. Therefore, I decided to focus on activities I'm naturally good at, like football or basketball.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như "sing for it" nên là "sing for" và "makes me happy" nên là "would make me happy" để phù hợp với câu điều kiện. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, súc tích.

範例: Although I'm not good at singing, if I had to choose someone to sing for, it would definitely be my girlfriend. She is very understanding and supportive, so she would patiently listen to my singing. Singing for her would be fun and would make me happy.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ "while music is such a powerful tool" nên dùng "because music is such a powerful tool" để câu rõ nghĩa hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối bị bỏ dở và có lỗi về danh từ số nhiều và số ít như "hatred they worries" nên là "hatred, worries". Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, sử dụng từ nối hợp lý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music is a powerful tool that unites people from different backgrounds. When people sing together, they forget their worries and difficulties, creating a sense of joy and community.

× I often feel shy and nervous whenever I have to perform in front the block audience.

✓ I often feel shy and nervous whenever I have to perform in front of the block audience.

The preposition 'in front' requires the preposition 'of' to indicate the position relative to something. The phrase should be 'in front of the block audience'.

× Guess I learned how to sing when there was a child.

✓ Guess I learned how to sing when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'was a child'. Also, 'was' is the correct past tense of 'be' for singular first person. The phrase 'there was a child' is incorrect here.

× However, I gave up after short time because I realized I didn't have much talent for it.

✓ However, I gave up after a short time because I realized I didn't have much talent for it.

The phrase 'after short time' is missing the article 'a' before 'short time'. This is necessary to specify the duration.

× Even though I practice so hard, I didn't see any improvement.

✓ Even though I practiced so hard, I didn't see any improvement.

The sentence mixes present tense 'practice' with past tense 'didn't see'. Both verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× So I decided that it's better to spend time on things and naturally good at, for example, football or basketball.

✓ So I decided that it's better to spend time on things I am naturally good at, for example, football or basketball.

The phrase 'things and naturally good at' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'things I am naturally good at' to correctly link the clause.

× However, if I had to choose one person to sing for it, it will definitely be my girlfriend.

✓ However, if I had to choose one person to sing for, it would definitely be my girlfriend.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'sing for'. Also, the conditional sentence requires 'would' instead of 'will' for the hypothetical situation.

× I think she is very understanding and supportive person and she will be patient enough to listen to my terrible singing.

✓ I think she is a very understanding and supportive person and she will be patient enough to listen to my terrible singing.

The noun 'person' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it when modified by adjectives.

× Besides, singing for her would be fun and makes me happy.

✓ Besides, singing for her would be fun and make me happy.

After 'would be fun and', the verb should be in base form 'make' to parallel 'would be'. 'Makes' is incorrect here.

× Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people, while music is such a powerful tool that can bring people from different backgrounds closer and make this world a better place.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people, and music is such a powerful tool that can bring people from different backgrounds closer and make this world a better place.

The conjunction 'while' suggests contrast, but the sentence intends to add information. 'And' is the correct conjunction here.

× Moreover, when people sing together, they forget about everything else, about the hatred they worries, the difficulties.

✓ Moreover, when people sing together, they forget about everything else, about the hatred they worry about, the difficulties.

The verb 'worries' should be 'worry' to agree with plural subject 'they'. Also, 'worry about' is the correct phrasal verb.

× Then at that time, there's always a sense of.

✓ Then at that time, there's always a sense of unity and happiness.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'a sense of'. Adding appropriate nouns completes the sentence meaningfully.