唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and have fun with my friends. For example, during holidays, we often go to karaoke bars to sing together and create happy memories.

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a direct response with simple, correct sentences. Use linking words if you add details, and avoid unnecessary words or phrases.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I only sing casually with my friends at home for fun.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I would like to sing for my family, especially my parents, because singing together helps us create special memories. Moreover, it strengthens our relationship by spending quality time together.

建議: Your answer shows a positive opinion but is unclear and contains many errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your ideas with specific reasons, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, it helps reduce stress and creates a joyful atmosphere, allowing people to feel relaxed and cheerful.

× Yes, I am a singing lover.

✓ Yes, I am a lover of singing.

The phrase 'a singing lover' is incorrect because 'singing' is a verb form used as an adjective here, which is unnatural. The correct expression is 'a lover of singing' to indicate someone who enjoys singing.

× I enjoy staying with my friends during holidays in karaoke.

✓ I enjoy spending time with my friends during holidays at karaoke.

The verb 'staying' is not appropriate here; 'spending time' fits better. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect for 'karaoke'; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× All those I'm a. Saying a tone deaf person.

✓ Although I am tone deaf, I still enjoy singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I do enjoy thing is can help me to unwind myself an create some shared memories with my.

✓ I do enjoy things that can help me to unwind and create some shared memories with my friends.

The sentence has missing words and incorrect pronoun usage. 'Thing is' should be 'things that', and 'my' is incomplete without a noun like 'friends'.

× Actually, our level drones how to say I just.

✓ Actually, I just know a little about singing.

The original sentence is incoherent and does not convey a clear meaning. It needs to be rewritten to express the intended idea.

× Is a I'm just a amateur eyes follow the sun as saying it together with my friends at home only.

✓ I am just an amateur who sings together with my friends at home only.

The sentence contains nonsensical phrases and incorrect pronouns. It needs to be simplified and corrected for clarity.

× Actually, I quite want to sing for my family member, especially my Paris, because it is a good way for us to create some shared memories.

✓ Actually, I quite want to sing for my family members, especially my parents, because it is a good way for us to create some shared memories.

'Family member' should be plural 'family members' to match the context. 'Paris' is likely a typo for 'parents'.

× Is quite impressive, Ann. Meaningful for us so that we can strengthen our relationship by staying together.

✓ It is quite impressive and meaningful for us so that we can strengthen our relationship by staying together.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' and has a typo 'Ann' instead of 'and'. Correcting these improves clarity.

× Singing is a. Way for me to bring a sense of pressure and happiness to others.

✓ Singing is a way for me to bring a sense of pleasure and happiness to others.

The word 'pressure' is incorrect in this context; 'pleasure' is the appropriate word to express positive feelings.

× It also is a good way to. With these stress from others.

✓ It is also a good way to deal with stress from others.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be completed and restructured for clarity.

× So that they can feel he lasts an. Feel crown where there isn't.

✓ So that they can feel relaxed and feel calm where there isn't stress.

The original sentence contains nonsensical words 'he lasts an' and 'feel crown'. These are likely mishearings or typos and need to be corrected to 'relaxed' and 'calm'.