唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it has been a favourite pastime since I was a child. Whenever I felt bored, singing helped me feel happier and more relaxed. Therefore, singing is an important part of my life.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Start with a direct answer, then provide specific details with linking words to explain your experience.

範例: I haven't learned to sing professionally, but my mother taught me some songs when I was a child. For example, I used to sing at family events like birthdays and weddings, which helped me enjoy singing more.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words to support your answer.

範例: I don't mind who I sing for; I enjoy singing for my family, friends, or classmates. Singing for different people allows me to share my happiness with everyone, not just one person.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Express your opinion clearly with correct sentence structures. Use linking words to explain your reasons and provide specific examples.

範例: In my opinion, singing definitely brings happiness to people. Many singers and songwriters create music that uplifts listeners, so singing is a wonderful way to spread joy.

× I like singing very much because.

✓ I like singing very much.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought, resulting in a sentence structure error. To correct it, remove 'because' or complete the sentence with a reason.

× I remember that I.

✓ I remember that.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly, causing a sentence structure error. It should be completed or rephrased to form a complete thought.

× I was singing when I was a child and that was my favorite thing to do when I was boring, when I was bored.

✓ I was singing when I was a child, and that was my favorite thing to do when I was bored.

The phrase 'when I was boring' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'bored' to describe feeling uninterested. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× So this is just the way how to.

✓ So this is just the way to do it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'to do it' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually I haven't heard.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned.

The verb 'heard' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'learned' to indicate acquiring knowledge or skill. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves readability.

× When I was a kid my mother teached me how to sync because I was singing.

✓ When I was a kid, my mother taught me how to sing because I was singing.

The past tense of 'teach' is 'taught', not 'teached'. Also, 'sync' should be 'sing'. A comma after 'kid' improves sentence clarity.

× Adds some events like birthday or. Marriage.

✓ She added some events like birthdays or marriages.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing it into a complete sentence with correct plural forms and subject clarifies the meaning.

× Like but haven't actually learned how to sync professionally.

✓ But I haven't actually learned how to sing professionally.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses 'sync' instead of 'sing'. Adding 'I' as the subject and correcting the verb improves grammar and clarity.

× For me it doesn't matter.

✓ For me, it doesn't matter.

A comma after 'For me' is needed to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving readability.

× I can speak for my parents, for my sister, for my friends, for someone in my class.

✓ I can sing for my parents, my sister, my friends, or someone in my class.

The verb 'speak' is incorrect in this context; 'sing' is appropriate. Also, 'or' is better than repeating 'for' before each noun for smoother flow.

× I just like the way is saying so I can speak for everyone.

✓ I just like the way of singing, so I can sing for everyone.

The phrase 'the way is saying' is incorrect; it should be 'the way of singing'. Also, 'speak' should be 'sing' to match the context.

× Not for just one person.

✓ Not just for one person.

The phrase 'for just one person' is better without 'for' at the beginning to avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow.

× In my point of view, if of course can because.

✓ In my point of view, of course it can because...

The phrase is incomplete and missing the subject 'it'. Also, 'if' is unnecessary here. Adding 'it' and removing 'if' corrects the sentence.

× There is a lot of singers, a lot of writers who sing and it brings happiness to people.

✓ There are a lot of singers, a lot of writers who sing, and they bring happiness to people.

'Singers' and 'writers' are plural, so 'are' should be used instead of 'is'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to refer to plural subjects.

× It had every time, so seeing is actually really good thing to do.

✓ It has every time, so singing is actually a really good thing to do.

The verb 'had' is incorrect; 'has' is appropriate for present perfect context. Also, 'seeing' should be 'singing', and 'a' is needed before 'really good thing'.