巧克力— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
考生
No, I don't like to eat chocolates because generally I avoid eating sweet because the sugar is not good for my body. Uh, but I prefer to eat dark chocolate because they taste bitter and the chocolate is very healthy. Also that's why I prefer to eat dark chocolates.
考官
How often do you eat chocolate?
考生
Not that much but within few days in week because I don't like that much. If I have more than yes I prefer to eat dark chocolate but not often, not daily because I'm not a chocolate type person.
考官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
考生
Yes, when I'm a kid I often eat chocolates because at childhood I like to eat chocolates and that time I am a fatty person. Fatty kid. Sorry but uh yes I love to eat chocolate in childhood everyday.
考官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
考生
Yes, the chocolate is very popular around the world because everybody like to eat or eat the chocolate and if there is a mood swings they eat chocolate and nowadays cake is also made-up of chocolates that's why people like to eat chocolate.
考官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
考生
My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because I love to eat that chocolate because I avoid sweets before I say that, but that chocolates gives me a energetic when I'm getting in gym before I eat chocolate, chocolate because it gives me energy.
考官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
考生
Yes, definitely. I believe that to the chocolate used as the gift to other because everybody likes to eat chocolates and at a special occasion we spread sweets because everybody like to eat chocolates and they enjoy that.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
分數: 65.0建議: Try to avoid redundancy and filler words like 'uh' and 'also'. Use clear and concise sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'dark chocolate tastes bitter').
範例: I don't like eating chocolates because I usually avoid sweets due to their high sugar content, which is unhealthy for me. However, I prefer dark chocolate since it tastes bitter and is healthier.
How often do you eat chocolate?
分數: 60.0建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, replace 'not that much' with 'not very often' and clarify frequency.
範例: I don't eat chocolate very often, maybe a few times a week. When I do, I prefer dark chocolate, but I never eat it daily because I'm not really a chocolate person.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
分數: 55.0建議: Use past tense consistently and avoid informal or inappropriate expressions like 'fatty kid'. Keep answers polite and clear. Also, avoid filler words and repetition.
範例: Yes, I often ate chocolates when I was a child because I liked them a lot. I used to enjoy eating chocolate every day during my childhood.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
分數: 60.0建議: Improve grammar and sentence coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid repetition and clarify points with specific reasons.
範例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy its taste. Additionally, people often eat chocolate to improve their mood. Nowadays, chocolate is also used in cakes, which increases its popularity.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
分數: 55.0建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'gives me a energetic' to 'gives me energy'.
範例: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because I usually avoid sweets. However, dark chocolate gives me energy, especially before I go to the gym.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
分數: 65.0建議: Make sentences more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors like 'everybody like' to 'everybody likes'.
範例: Yes, definitely. Chocolate makes a good gift because most people enjoy eating it. On special occasions, sweets like chocolate are often shared and appreciated.
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