巧克力— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
考生
In principle, I like chocolate, but the sweetness should be moderate. Eating chocolate makes me feel better at the difficult times. And remind me of happy times of my childhood.
考官
How often do you eat chocolate?
考生
Except for a difficult time, I eat chocolate about once every two weeks. After all, it is high in calories and not suitable for eating often. But sometimes I still can't help but want to eat it. For example, when somebody sends chocolate for.
考官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
考生
Yes, before six years old, I was raised by my grandmother. She very loved me, so even if my parents asked me to stop eating chocolate, she still prepared many kinds of chocolate for me. So at that time, I usually eat chocolate 3 to 4.
考官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
考生
I think it probably because chocolate really has a magic of healing the soul. I've heard many people say eating chocolate makes them feel better. In addition, merchants actively advertise, for example, on Valentine's Day.
考官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
考生
My favorite is milk chocolate, although this sounds a bit like child's preference, it has smooth and rich texture and smells good. Uh, I think another reason may be due to the fact that I ate this flavor the first time that I tried chocolate.
考官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
考生
Except for people who don't like chocolate, I think chocolate is a nice gift to give others. Because it can makes many ships.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“remind”应为“reminds”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me feel better during difficult times and reminds me of the happy moments from my childhood.
How often do you eat chocolate?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“sends chocolate for”不完整。建议使用完整句子并用连接词使内容更连贯。
範例: I usually eat chocolate about once every two weeks because it is high in calories. However, I sometimes can't resist eating it, especially when someone gives me chocolate as a gift.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“She very loved me”应为“She loved me very much”，句子结尾不完整。建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致。
範例: Yes, when I was a child, especially before I was six, my grandmother took care of me. She loved me very much and often gave me different kinds of chocolate, even when my parents told me to stop eating it. At that time, I usually ate chocolate three to four times a week.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答较好，但“magic of healing the soul”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a comforting effect on people. Many say that eating chocolate makes them feel happier. Moreover, companies promote chocolate actively, especially during occasions like Valentine's Day.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，如“child's preference”应为“childish preference”，并且句子结构可以更简洁。
範例: My favorite flavor is milk chocolate because it has a smooth and rich texture and a pleasant aroma. I also like it because it was the first type of chocolate I ever tried.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“can makes many ships”不明白意思。建议使用完整且清晰的句子表达观点。
範例: I think chocolate is a good gift for most people, except those who don't like it. It is a sweet and thoughtful present that can make people happy.
文法
× And remind me of happy times of my childhood.
✓ And it reminds me of happy times of my childhood.
句子缺少主语，导致谓语动词形式错误。应加上主语"it"，并将动词改为第三人称单数形式"reminds"。
× For example, when somebody sends chocolate for.
✓ For example, when somebody sends chocolate.
介词"for"在此处使用不当，句子不完整。应去掉"for"，使句子完整且符合语法。
× So at that time, I usually eat chocolate 3 to 4.
✓ So at that time, I usually ate chocolate 3 to 4 times.
描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时"ate"。此外，数字后应加量词"times"以表达次数。
× She very loved me, so even if my parents asked me to stop eating chocolate, she still prepared many kinds of chocolate for me.
✓ She loved me very much, so even if my parents asked me to stop eating chocolate, she still prepared many kinds of chocolate for me.
"very loved me"表达不自然，应改为"loved me very much"，将副词"very"放在动词后面修饰。
× Because it can makes many ships.
✓ Because it can make many people happy.
"can makes"中"makes"应为原形"make"，且"ships"用词错误，应为"people happy"或类似表达。
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