巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如"I don't like eat chocolate"应为"I don't like eating chocolate"。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I don't like eating chocolate because it is too sweet for me. Moreover, I avoid sweet desserts to protect my health, especially my teeth.

建議: 回答中时态使用不准确，如"I stop"应为"I stopped"。建议使用连接词如"but"来连接句子，并注意表达的清晰和准确。

範例: After I became an adult, I stopped eating chocolate. However, I sometimes buy it for my friends because I believe sweet desserts can help improve their mood.

建議: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如"requested me count it"应为"asked me to count it"。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

範例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. I especially enjoyed counting the chocolates my parents gave me because it was exciting. Eating chocolate was my favorite childhood activity.

建議: 回答内容较好，但"desert"应为"dessert"，且"dazzled"用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is a dessert that makes people feel good. For example, it can help improve mood when people feel stressed or tired.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I don't like eat"应为"I don't like eating"，"It don't have"应为"It doesn't have"。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I don't like eating chocolate because it is too sweet. However, if I had to choose, I would pick dark chocolate because it doesn't have too much sugar.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，如"couldn't buy expensive gift"应为"can't buy expensive gifts"，"it can avoid other people have great pressures"表达不自然。建议简化句子，明确表达观点。

範例: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift. As a student, I can't afford expensive gifts, and chocolate is a nice and affordable option that doesn't put pressure on others.

× I don't like eat chocolate because it's so sweet for me, my parents, me that I couldn't eat any sweet desserts.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because it's so sweet for me and my parents that I couldn't eat any sweet desserts.

动词like后面应该接动名词形式（-ing），而不是动词原形。这里应使用'eating'。

× I have to keep my health, especially my teeth.

✓ I have to keep healthy, especially my teeth.

这里表达保持健康，应该用形容词healthy而不是名词health。

× After I became an adult, I stop eating chocolate, but sometimes I can buy chocolate for my friends because I believe that sweet dessert can help people to recover great feeling.

✓ After I became an adult, I stopped eating chocolate, but sometimes I buy chocolate for my friends because I believe that sweet desserts can help people recover great feelings.

动作发生在过去，动词stop应使用过去式stopped；can buy改为一般现在时buy，因为是习惯动作；'sweet dessert'应为复数sweet desserts；'help people to recover'中to可省略。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I often ate chocolate.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I often ate chocolate.

该句无语法错误，时态使用正确。

× I especially liked it when my parents requested me count it because it makes me so exciting.

✓ I especially liked it when my parents asked me to count it because it made me so excited.

request后应接宾语加不定式，改为'asked me to count it'；'makes me so exciting'应为'made me so excited'，exciting是形容词，意为令人兴奋，excited表示感到兴奋。

× Eating chocolate was my favorite thing in my childhood.

✓ Eating chocolate was my favorite thing during my childhood.

表达“在童年期间”应使用during而非in。

× Yes, chocolate is popular for everyone because it's a kind of desert that offers a great feeling for everyone when people feel stressed or dazzled, as it can help improve their mood.

✓ Yes, chocolate is popular with everyone because it's a kind of dessert that offers a great feeling to everyone when people feel stressed or dazzled, as it can help improve their mood.

popular后应接介词with而非for；dessert拼写错误。

× I don't like eat chocolate, I think it's so sweet.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate; I think it's so sweet.

like后应接动名词形式eating。

× If I had to choose I would pick dark chocolate. It don't have too high a sugar content.

✓ If I had to choose, I would pick dark chocolate. It doesn't have too high a sugar content.

主语It是第三人称单数，动词应使用doesn't而非don't。

× Yes, I think it's a great gift for everyone because as a student I couldn't buy expensive gift for other people because it can avoid other people have great pressures.

✓ Yes, I think it's a great gift for everyone because as a student I couldn't buy expensive gifts for other people, and it can help others avoid great pressure.

gift应为复数gifts；避免重复使用because，改为and连接；'avoid other people have great pressures'结构错误，应改为'help others avoid great pressure'。