巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và mở rộng câu trả lời để tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes very sweet, and I enjoy sweet flavors.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý đến thì của động từ. Ngoài ra, nên chia câu rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I usually eat chocolate three times a week when I go to school, but during the summer, I don't eat it very often.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.

範例: When I was a kid, I didn't often eat chocolate because it was bad for my teeth.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and many people enjoy its sweet flavor.

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và mở rộng thêm chi tiết.

範例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is sweet and creamy.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác. Bạn nên giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift because it is sweet and enjoyable, and most people appreciate receiving it.

× Yes, I eating chocolate because it's very sweet and I like sweet.

✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate because it's very sweet and I like sweet things.

The verb 'eating' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I like eating chocolate'. Also, 'I like sweet' is incomplete; it should be 'I like sweet things' to be grammatically correct.

× When I go to school I eat chocolate three times a week and now is a summer time I don't often eat chocolate.

✓ When I go to school, I eat chocolate three times a week, but now it is summer, so I don't often eat chocolate.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and articles. 'Now is a summer time' should be 'now it is summer'. Also, the sentence needs commas and conjunctions to connect ideas properly.

× When I work it, I don't often eat chocolate because it's not good for my teeth.

✓ When I worked, I didn't often eat chocolate because it wasn't good for my teeth.

The sentence refers to past habits, so past tense verbs 'worked' and 'didn't' should be used instead of present tense. 'When I work it' is incorrect; it should be 'When I worked'.

× I think chocolate is popular around the world because it is very delicious and many people like the flavor sweets.

✓ I think chocolate is popular around the world because it is very delicious and many people like sweet flavors.

'The flavor sweets' is incorrect; it should be 'sweet flavors' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'flavor' should be plural to match 'many people'.

× I like is sweet.

✓ I like sweet chocolate.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I like is sweet' is ungrammatical. It should be 'I like sweet chocolate' to express preference clearly.

× Yes, I think it's good to use chocolate as gifts to others because chocolate is very sweet and you can give everyone some sweet and they are things good to you, good for you.

✓ Yes, I think it's good to use chocolate as gifts for others because chocolate is very sweet and you can give everyone some sweets, which are good for you.

The pronouns and phrases are incorrectly used. 'Gifts to others' should be 'gifts for others'. 'Some sweet' should be 'some sweets'. 'They are things good to you' is awkward; 'which are good for you' is better.