巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using simple linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

範例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and a little sour. When I was a child, I used to eat a lot of chocolate, so I have always enjoyed it.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Try to give a clear frequency and explain briefly using linking words.

範例: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a week. Since I was a child, I have enjoyed chocolate regularly.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because my mom bought a lot of it for me. I really enjoyed eating it with my family.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not explain the reason well. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with logical reasons using linking words.

範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and makes people feel happy. Also, it is easy to share with others.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Give a clear topic sentence and explain why you like that flavour using linking words.

範例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is white chocolate because it tastes sweet and creamy. However, I know it is not very healthy, so I eat it in moderation.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear opinion and explain why using simple linking words.

範例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it is sweet and many people like it. For example, I often give chocolate to my boyfriend on special occasions.

× Yes, I like chocolate 'cause. Chocolate is sweet and. Little sour.

✓ Yes, I like chocolate because it is sweet and a little sour.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and articles. 'Cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formality, and 'Little sour' needs an article 'a' and to be connected properly to the previous clause.

× When I have such child I. Many Chocolate 8 Inc. Yes, I like chocolate.

✓ When I was a child, I ate a lot of chocolate. Yes, I like chocolate.

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. 'When I have such child I' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was a child'. 'Many Chocolate 8 Inc.' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'I ate a lot of chocolate' to make sense.

× Since I I have. Child. I was a child UM. I have I have been 18 for five years ago. Yes. Wonderful **** I am.

✓ Since I was a child, I have liked chocolate. I have been 18 for five years. Yes, I am wonderful.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'Since I I have. Child.' is incorrect; it should be 'Since I was a child'. 'I have been 18 for five years ago' mixes present perfect with a past time expression; corrected to 'I have been 18 for five years'.

× Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

✓ Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

This sentence is grammatically correct as it is a past tense question using 'did' properly.

× Yeah, I. I will say. For a file, yes. Up my mom mom by my mom bought took a lot. With me. Anne. Aye.

✓ Yeah, I will say yes. My mom bought a lot of chocolate for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'For a file' and 'Anne. Aye.' are nonsensical. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Maybe. Chocolate is so sweet. But. Uhm. Chocolate. Oh how GW head intelligent people. I use that, people use that. Intelligent.

✓ Maybe chocolate is so sweet. Also, many intelligent people like chocolate. People use it a lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Oh how GW head intelligent people'. The correction provides a coherent and grammatically correct explanation.

× My favorite flower chocolate is white chocolate recovers white chocolate is so Tian test the.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is white chocolate because white chocolate is so tasty.

'Flower' should be 'flavor'. 'Recovers' is incorrect and replaced with 'because'. 'Tian test the' is likely a mishearing of 'tasty'. The sentence is corrected for adjective use and clarity.

× Uh, but it's unhealthy. Am also. Right, talk about this.

✓ Uh, but it's unhealthy. I also think so. Let's talk about this.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks subject and verb in 'Am also'. The correction adds the subject 'I' and verb 'think' for clarity.

× Yes, I go, I go. My boyfriend. Uhm. I give him a bum when things they. Because. Couple couple key.

✓ Yes, I do. I give my boyfriend chocolate as a gift when we have special occasions because we are a couple.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I give him a bum when things they' is nonsensical. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence fitting the context.