巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and coherent answer with complete sentences. Avoid short fragmented sentences and clarify your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I used to be obsessed with eating chocolate, especially when I brewed V60 coffee. I loved drinking it with a little chocolate. However, now that I am focusing on being healthy, I eat chocolate less often, and it feels normal for me.

建議: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use linking words to organize your answer and provide specific details about frequency and preferences.

範例: I usually buy chocolate from the supermarket and eat it regularly. My favorite flavor is strawberry chocolate, which I find delicious, even though many people might not like it.

建議: Avoid commenting on the question. Instead, answer it directly with a clear and complete sentence. Use linking words to explain your habits as a child.

範例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I loved its sweet taste and it was a special treat for me.

建議: Try to give a more confident and structured answer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide reasons with examples.

範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and many people enjoy it. Since I was a kid, I have seen chocolate everywhere, so it feels normal to me.

建議: Give a clear answer with complete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference and describe why you like it.

範例: My favorite flavor is milk chocolate, especially the Oreo brand. I enjoy dipping a piece in milk and butter before eating it because it tastes so yummy.

建議: Answer clearly and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to explain your opinion and conditions for giving chocolate as a gift.

範例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift, but it depends on the person. If someone is healthy and enjoys chocolate, then it is a perfect gift for them.

× Before I was obsessed. With eating chocolate.

✓ Before, I was obsessed with eating chocolate.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly split. Combining the fragments into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Specifically when I bring V60.

✓ Specifically when I brew V60.

The verb 'bring' is incorrect in this context; 'brew' is the correct verb to describe making coffee with a V60.

× I would love to drink it with a little. Chocolate.

✓ I would love to drink it with a little chocolate.

The sentence is incorrectly split; 'a little chocolate' should be part of the same sentence for clarity.

× But now after I being healthy, I it's normal for me, it's OK.

✓ But now, after being healthy, it's normal for me; it's OK.

The phrase 'after I being healthy' is incorrect; 'after being healthy' is the correct form. Also, 'I it's normal' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'it's normal'.

× I didn't specifically understand the question, but I eat chocolate like I I get it from.

✓ I didn't specifically understand the question, but I eat chocolate when I get it from the supermarket.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'when' and completing the thought improves grammatical correctness and meaning.

× Supermarket and I eat it normally.

✓ the supermarket, and I eat it normally.

The sentence fragment 'Supermarket and I eat it normally.' lacks an article before 'supermarket' and needs to be connected properly to the previous sentence.

× And, uh, I love the chocolate that was, UM, strawberry.

✓ And, uh, I love the chocolate that is strawberry flavored.

The phrase 'that was, UM, strawberry' is awkward and incorrect; using 'that is strawberry flavored' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Alot of people don't think that but I think.

✓ A lot of people don't think that, but I do.

The word 'Alot' is misspelled; it should be 'A lot'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'do' to complete the thought.

× I think your question is wrong. 'Cause how you say? Did you often? Eat chocolate when you were kid.

✓ I think your question is wrong. How do you say, 'Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?'

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Rephrasing it as a question and adding the article 'a' before 'kid' corrects the errors.

× Often it's mean lately or something like that.

✓ 'Often' means frequently or many times, not 'lately' or something like that.

The explanation clarifies the meaning of 'often' to correct the misunderstanding in the original sentence.

× When you're a kid, it's. Long ago, right?

✓ When you're a kid, it's a long time ago, right?

The sentence is fragmented; adding 'a' and connecting the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Since. I was a kid, I see the chocolate, so it's normal for me.

✓ Since I was a kid, I have seen chocolate, so it's normal for me.

The verb tense 'see' is incorrect here; 'have seen' is appropriate to indicate experience from past to present.

× But I get I guess.

✓ But I guess.

The phrase 'I get I guess' is ungrammatical and redundant; 'I guess' suffices.

× It's because. It's so tasty.

✓ It's because it's so tasty.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the two parts into one sentence improves flow and correctness.

× I don't know, but maybe it's so tasty. That's the reason why.

✓ I don't know, but maybe it's so tasty; that's the reason why.

Combining the sentences with a semicolon improves sentence flow and correctness.

× I don't know the normal one, the chocolate with milk.

✓ I don't know, the normal one is the chocolate with milk.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is unclear; adding 'is' clarifies the meaning.

× And I have this brand called Oreo.

✓ And I have this brand called Oreo.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× It's my. Might my favor like.

✓ It's my favorite, I think.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love when I take one piece and put it in the milk and butter in my mouth.

✓ I love when I take one piece, put it in the milk, and then put it in my mouth.

The phrase 'and butter in my mouth' is incorrect; likely intended 'and put it in my mouth'. Adding commas and conjunctions improves clarity.

× Yeah, of course, but it depends on the person themselves.

✓ Yeah, of course, but it depends on the person.

The reflexive pronoun 'themselves' is unnecessary here and should be omitted.

× Like if he is a healthy person you can give them chocolate as a gift right?

✓ Like if he is a healthy person, you can give him chocolate as a gift, right?

The pronouns 'he' and 'them' do not agree; 'him' should be used to match 'he'.

× But if he. It's OK with eating chocolate. Every day then it's perfect gift for him.

✓ But if he is OK with eating chocolate every day, then it's a perfect gift for him.

The sentence is fragmented and missing verbs; combining and correcting the structure improves clarity and grammar.